ima be honest, i have no idea why i like this book so much... its a lot like other things ive read but like... i want more
Would recommend others to read, give it a chance and it will probably 'grow' on you. The author is know for having a good sense when it comes to writing. I'm sure the abilities won't disappoint. You may think it's just another op main character and maybe your right but the actions and skills of the character can always create a fun and interesting story. I personally love stories like this one.
Romance? Harem? Yuri? NTR? Lemons? System? Hiding identity/power? It would be good to have tags in the synopsis to know what I am getting myself in.
This story, for what I'm seeing this is going to be a really good piece.I'm so glad I read it. You can tell the author put a-lot of effort and thought to this novel.
Biased review....But this is my first novel and from an outside perspective I think this is pretty well done.The Mc will not be op from the very beginning and I'm not planning on making a harem
it is very interesting and I want more chapters!! keeping more!! keeping going! I can't wait! it seem I like it!! ???
I like the concept and world building of your story. You explain it in detail. I also like how the setting of your story, I remember the anime Ajin. But I have some inputs, namely you can tidy up your writing paragraphs, and also maybe you can use the symbol (") for dialogues, not using (-) because it is very rarely used in novels.
the writing quality is good, I haven't seen any noticeable grammatical error until now. the story holds potential with the mc's race which I shall not spoil and the different skills, for the characters we are only introduced to the mc for now who is fairly intresting and we don't really know much of the wider world but what we have seen is intriguing., the author updates regularly so there's that.
THIS IS AMAZING ???? . what a growth of characters ??. it was an page turning novel ( what a plot ❤❤❤) . loved it. more updates.. will there be a love traingle btw lucifer, alex and davina?? ? who will be the second mate ?? ... i am so excited. we need upstree. ??? ..i strongly recommend it.
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So far , with each passing moment it has me more hooked like a fish and on the edge of my seat, with the character introductions to the progression of the story so far,, can’t wait for next chapter as it seems a intense individual has shown up!
It was a good start loved the intresting and intriguing setting of the story can't wait to read more..... the introduction of the villian was nice i hope to see more character development still but overall it was nice