Early review here! I don't know what the first word in this novel is but the synopsis got my attention! Really like cultivation in a modern world so this gets an instance of credibility from me. I'm tired of the whole clan, sect, young master b.s. and a more advanced society could do this genre better imo.
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Very good concept, but I can see that author is not really exploiting all the potential yet, it is good to have fights scenes but it is not so good when the fight scene is dragged out and logically it could have ended sooner and carried on but it did not. In my opinion, there is a lot of information that does not matter or affect the story in any way so author should reconsider to make the flow better without boring chapters.
I made a rash review, the novel itself isn't bad but by reading it here is no different from reading it in MTL, the grammar is horrible, u might make it thru 4~5 chapters through will power alone but you will give up eventually.
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Such great novel, the plot twists r so good ngl , and aidan my beautiful kid glad that someone wrote sarcastic and sassy characters with some depth.jacob's pretty cool tho but i can't wait to hear abt chaseand ofc miss sissel is pretty cool too since she isn't the typical doormat glad that u wrote her with an actual personality.the story's pacing is bearable thankfully u're not rurushing the couple (❁ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)◞Anyways it's a great novel i recommend u give it a shot
The story is good enough although it's a generic rebirth and get all benefits kind of story but the racism and nationalism is a pita.Ffs that war occurred 80 years ago...get over it.
Has a lot of broken English splashed around into the text. along with miss use of words. it has alot of the vibe of shield girl but it's slower which is nice.
pretty interesting start right off the bat. The protagonist, Touma, is already really strong, and there's no time wasted jumping into the action. I would like to know how he got to this level in the first place, but ill guess ill see that later. the overseers are pretty cool, wanna see more of them too
An acceptably decent read. It’s not very good or original but it is ok if you want to kill time. Seen every idea here countless times. Perhaps it would be too much praise to call this mediocre. I‘ve been hospitalised so take this review with a grain of salt, I am very sick. 2.25/5
Overall a decently good novel with a mc who is getting strong really fast but the mc is a fool and the annoying translation errors makes this a 3/5
Ciara most annoying character to read.....