I'm on chapter 81 currently and I'm satisfied with the mc and fmc.. really love the novel .. .keep up the good work author, hope you become a full pledge author..
Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐I tried really hard to like this story.My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere.I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on.I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines.I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it.We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting. And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there. He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever.So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something. MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again?There are also some really stupid stuff going on like:- MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to)Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again.But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km) I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingySo you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4?(also does not take him long to get to the top)-MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks?Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place.He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now.-And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again.-And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever.-... ...Then lets talk about MC.- He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff)- Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone - Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff.-Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockheadAlso don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever.Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years. Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit.We also know noting abut the world. Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents.oo Yea and the last one, there is so much F I L L E RIdk there is so much more that pisses me off but ill stop here.
Only takes in female diciplesInteractions are trashEveryone worships himAll his diciples seem to only have one trait: they love mc
Imma just say i was here before 100k views. truly a great read with tons of potential. its only been 18 chapters but i can say that its unique and you wont regret reading it
This story reminds me of a movie that i love called "Brewster's Millions" the movie is about a failed baseball player that gets an inheritance from a relative he never knew existed. This story has nothing to do with baseball but in the movie the MC is given two choices take a million dollars now or take 30million and try and spend it all in 30 days with out acquiring any assets. So he has to be penny less by the end of the 30 days to win the real inheritance of 300million dollars. With on those 30days The MC has a hard time spending his money because he starts spending it on things he thinks are dumb stuff but those dumb stuff ends up making him money.That's what this MC does as well. The MC takes over an existing body of a prodigal. And to not arouse suspicion he acts like a prodigal. The body he took over is extremely sick and with a really small di ck. So since he cant get with women and a slightly strong breeze can push him over. He tends to do nothing but spend his extremely rich parents money.The new MC try's to keep with that tradition especially since he got a system that will help heal him as he spends money. While The MC starts to purchase allot of items and property that to most people looks like a waste of money as well as the MC, It turns in to a gold mine. Everything he spends money on just trying to waist money for the system quest ends up making him millions back, with out him trying to. Same with the MC in "Brewster's Millions" both there goals is to spend the money. They are not thinking about making it, it just so happens to work that way. It's like his luck lvl is Maxed out.Allot of people don't like it because of the MC's attitude and how he treats his parents but they way i see it is hes just acting like how the original person in that body would. He never really talked back to his parents he more so acted like a 9 year old kid begging his mom and dad for some money to buy a toy. It's a fun read. So if you can get threw like the first 30 chapters where he just seems to spend money and not make it. Past that is when the fun happens, at least for me anyways.
Yo 「Kidney System」 when?
A story that has potential. I like the way the author takes the time to show the main character(s) before they get their abilities. It seems like the characters won't experience an unreasonable character change like we see in a lot of stories like this
(Disclaimer: i only read about 300 something chapters)this novel is meh. It was cool at the beginning, but then it went from a cold mc and his own personal power growth to just army building and nonsense harem most of the time. The power progression of the mc is also absolutely bonkers, he takes forever to make breakthroughs and the requirements to make them are outright ludicrous. what's the point of realms and orders if you can just skip them and kill beyond your order? at first it gave you quite the dopamine rush reading these type of david vs goliath encounters, but then you realize how dumb the power system is. also, never once cared for the whole succubus partner deal, so that was also one of the things that put me off.
How the heck an immense trash novel have more than 1000 chapters and a good one only a few 100? After reading only 2 chapters my pulse got to 100,how stupid is that mc? 100 bip,120 bip,130 bip blablabla blablabla blablabla
Hello Ms. Author, your book was well-written it was really an interesting story. Looking forward for the next chapter.
You guys should give it a try
I'm unsure why I can't go back to volume 1 and re-read!! why am I being asked to unlock pages I've already unlocked