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Ako 'to si Tenk, I've read the your story na. The plot is normal and you could see right through it and you will already know what will happen to them. The MC is not likable but I think there will be a character development that will soon arise. But maybe the ideas of mine that pop into my brain might be wrong but despite the fact it is still well written and worth to read. There is still more rooms for improvement but don't be discourage, you did great and I might as well finish your story. This story has potential and the author too. Keep writing!
This novel is like an airplane taking offGetting better by each chapter passing The mistakes that the author made at the beginning are none exsistant
there's not much to go on right this second but it's got the groundwork to be something better than a lot of other things I've read so I can't wait to see where you go from here
I'm sad because there hasn't been a new chapter for 1 month, I'm happier to be able to read this work of art.................................
little note auther if you see this trnasfer all the chapters to fanfic cause well its a fanfic and eventually people will have to use fast passes to read the story
Hehe I love this already. I don't know how to describe it, but right now it feels like that the world building and the power systems are very well built and organized. It's very tightly knit currently (unlike how some world buildings that are very loose), and I hope the plot would also be very tightly knit. I especially like the new unique setting of this novel. I'm really grateful to find something different, yet well executed in webnovel.Keep up the great work author! (Also I love the two mcs XD)But I'm also anxious to find out what the second half of the title will mean for the story. But we're barely into the story so- []~(￣▽￣)~*
Very good stories, updates are great, Mc is a rock, and this is one of a kind.YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES
It's a very interesting read! The premise is really good and I really like it very much. Of course the writing could be improved, but everyone can improve ? 5 stars for this one!
Writing style? It's a TEN, why? I like the way it was written in details. I'm not a fan of reading magical realism or anything that relates to fantasy but the author did a great job by letting the reader feel they are on scenes and I feel im one the scene. Keep writing
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