Great start. So curious to know more. Also excited to know that what happened to that cruel mother. Cute Peach
I wanted to read the story but who would've known that the story just started and a "young master" came out of nowhere to kill the MC. This just ruined my mood and I stopped reading.
Now that's sakingdom building,not like some bs novel I've red it past few days
Such an entertaining read that feels fresh. I’m absolutely ready for a story like this to be a comic or show
First off, I will say that the writing quality of this story is great. They do a lot of things right, and the story has many enjoyable parts. I find myself smiling quite a bit at sections of the story. That said, there are two glaring issues with this story that need to be addressed. First off, the reincarnation aspect of this story is basically pointless. The main character is a human who was born into the body of a dragon, so you'd think there'd be some difference between him and other dragons right? Nope. This MC no different from the others. Thinking like a dragon, acting like one, and is essentially dominated by his dragon instincts like 90% of the time. If you wondering if his human side is ever going to matter, you can safely put those thoughts to rest. He is a sociopath who lovingly plays with his family and then slaughters hundreds of humans with a smile on his face while complaining that it was too easy like all the others. He brings nothing new.In addition to this, it seems like the dragons in this story suffer from brain damage. They preach about keeping balance and how humans are using mana wrong. But they never try to explain anything to them. The dragons constantly complain about this problem as well, but they're causing the very issue they're trying to stop. The dragons also set up a training ground for young dragons to kill humans, but if humans ever win, they get butthurt and go destroy cities completely unrelated to the deaths and say: "Yeah! That's what you deserve!"What's worse is that these dragons think of themselves as wise and intelligent beings. And for the most part, they are. They even go out of their way to collect EXTENSIVE knowledge on specific human kingdoms. Yet somehow they can't grasp these very simple pieces of common sense.
Sounded interesting in the summary, though, after reading a few chapters i cant get interested enough in the MC to continue, but the biggest probem for me is the world building, even if the story is 2000 years in the future humanity stagnated in the 20th century, no matter how much you want to play victim and blame the world technology will aways bleed through all layers of society (just not a the same time) if not for the simple fact that we live in a capitalist economy (the same reason slavery ceased to exist, money trumps everything), so in summary the impression i have is that victim mentality not only shaped the MC but also the World
Good story bro keep it up and don't drop this story ? Waiting for new chapter ??
Can’t stand the childish Mc who wastes the system that they get. He acts like he’s 10 five or take a year. The rambling on without controlling what he says combined with the childish antics is too much and I didn’t even finish the first arc…
Came for the harem tag..... Expecting love comedy or what-not, but nah only serious things happening.... sooo I'm leaving I guess, but here 5 star for elf.
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This is a good story and the pace is very good. Read it for what is a story, not your personal made up event. i get tired of poeple telling authors how to write their story. This is a awesome read and should be getting more hype. Two thumbs up and keep it going Author-sama…. Oh ya drinks on me served by her. Back off buddy, she is MINE. LOL starts fist fight just because a little brawl always make the drinking better.
Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ?!
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.