its a wonderful story keep up the good work . the characters are amazing. you are doing pretty well as a first timer well done , keep updating am with you till the end
I enjoyed reading this book, it keeps the readers Reading. my only problem is with the grammar. I look forward to reading future chapter that you put out. Have a nice day author San ?
Really love this novel, I recommend it to everyone that likes evil MCs, It's fantastic, especially the powers and the personality of all the characters. The MC's bearing is also superb. Top rate.
A bland copy of a webtoon called The Gamer, another trashy story where each fight boils down to "Skill of the week vs villain of the week type battles". Same thing, but this rehash is made by a person with the same intelligence as the average Overgeared reader.
Loving this story so far. The MC isn't your normal over powered guy. Loving the fact that his marital arts is from farming. Love love love the greedy system
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i do really like this story. yeah it start'swith a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
super well written novel. I enjoyed reading it until he got to college ....and thats when the plot got kinda strange...however my advice to the author is to make the main character more consistent (which would improve the progression of the plot significantly). Your MC dabbles in too many things and then abandons them, and he is a little too perfect. Plus there are some major plotholes pushing the plot just to show off the MC's perfect skills and Gary-Stuness. Take the time to develop his decision making and the thinking that goes into his actions. After reading for awhile i found the MC behaving like a drastically different person every chapter as if he has a split personality disorder. Please to slow down and justify the MC's actions, things happen too fast and for no reason other than his justice-boner. Let the MC enjoy his newfound freedom, I don't understand why you would make him basically return to his old profession when he has limitless potential. Overall this is down to a matter of taste, but to other readers i really do recommend you read this novel as it is significantly better than most novels you find on this site and has plot elements for everyone.
Nice story. I love it, so much ??? Please update, please. It's super nice. really, I recommend it. It's all about family, action and romance.
This story is really awesome. I am completely enjoying the plot line. But can you please start dishing out more chapters? It’s been over six months since I’ve last read a new chapter from this novel.
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first 40 chapters are pretty good, a bit too much going on with ranks of all sort but good translation and decent story. after ch 40 though, it becomes unreadable. feels like they hijacked a popular story and put it through chatgpt so thentranslators can show their bosses that they did something. from a solid 4/5 to a 1/5. this is a worrying recent trend