Now I am not a fan when it comes to OP Mc but this novel is one of the reasonable OP MC where there is a very logical reason of why he is OP and also the opponents he face feel like a real threat to MC unlike other novels where the enemies seem like 2 dimensional mob enemies.A very Great book and i believe that some hate comes form the fact that this novel is intentionally putting the starting chapter feels like a pain to read but it gets better the further you progress. As a normal book this would have been a very good story but due to it being WN it requires patience on the reader side for new chapter to come.(I am really not a fan of OP MC and prefer Weak to strong but this novel does the OP MC's power gain very logically and neat. Thank you author for bringing this novel to life.
I Really like this novel, while the writing still needs improvement so it would be better if u hire a proof reader and pay him to help u with the novel, other than this I really like ur plot and ur style of writing I see potential in this work as I saw in BW its just that I felt empty when BW ended but This novel gives me the Same vibe as BW and I hope that u do a better work then him. ❤️❤️?
It's interesting and fun to read. A fresh experience.
A wonderful short story. It is so beautiful and heart warming. I hope more people will read this.(╥_╥) .......................................................... Well done author.
Yes I am reviewing my own story.I began to write this series because I was interested in series like Konosuba. I asked myself "What would YOU want out of an isekai series?" and so I decided to write my own.This story is designed to poke fun at the general idea of isekai wish fulfillment series while also being its own story. I don't want to sound egotistical, but from what others have told me the writing is funny and consistently well done, the characters are memorable and enjoyable, and the world is well built. I don't ask that you make this your favorite story, but I do recommend that you at least give this a try.
Muito bom já estou viciado e recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. .........................................................................................
A curious set of characteristics of the main character! Unusually accurate, this is a real Minstream! An interesting genre - the horrors ... and the title page immediately meets the eyes, a good move!Respect to the author !!!
the jumps in the story were a little hard to follow and it feels like the author makes jumps and assumptions about what the reader knows far to often but the richness of the characters and the back ground development while being spotty and hard to follow really carry this story
Shi.tposting is an art! and this is the prime example of it! I'm hooked, I'm hooked, I'm hooked! I don't want this novel ever to end! And I hope it wont!
Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.
Glad to have the pleasure to read this story for free. It is very good, annoying in some cases. But overall its solid with great action, drama and character growth for Jionni. Though I am more curious about who his other loves will be. I can say my favorite part of this fic was his interaction with the spider leader and her misunderstanding of the situation. An Jionni had to correct that with the swiftness. Please continue writing, its a solid story and I love the interactions. Which are the highlights of this story.
Its good. Back to reading