Like this story can't wait for the next update.It is very good written and story has nice development --------------------------------------------------------
Pros:Everything is great! I got 0 Story problems.Cons:My only problem is the grammar.---I need 140 words so Yup...`1234567890-=qwertyuiop[]asdfghjkl;'zxcvbnm,./
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Hi! This is the writer of "the world we do not know".Kudos for the work buddy! I really liked the plot and how Al coped his father's death by playing video games on his father's name. The idea of dark web elements is also good and those other game character named made me laugh. All in all a good adventure in VR looking forward to how it proceeds. Thank you!
even though it looks completed it is not and he’s also still charging coins for something that is not completed and currently paused on production to do another book what are you could’ve just continued the bookies currently writing
Amber Sword? But probably not as good as that. Hmm... Descent of the Magic God and Night Ranger. This book is gonna have some serious competition. I hope author treats the world as a real world and the 'ex' NPCs like humans or monsters... Or whatever their species is. MC acting like the whole world is his gameboard is outdated and well, impossible. Since ppl are real can we have proper effects of The Butterfly Theory and also his affect on timeline. His every action will suposedly be against the actual plot. So please... Give us some plot clashes and unexpected events. Now for the much awaited rating.Honestly, I can't see the book. Is it a bug??? So I am giving a one star to all of it. I am really sorry here. I tried to read and give proper ratings, but the books is probably too high tired for low levelers like me. I can see nothing! *sob*So one star. Really sorry. Maybe when I am able to see it again, I will start editing it. Cya. Hv fun. And qidan still doesn't has an 'edit' function. Wtf...
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This is literally machine translated and is nearly unreadable. No aspect of the English language is done correctly. some sentences will hurt your head trying to understand.
It seems like comedy.It feels like comedy.It should be comedy.It will be comedy,therefore the comedy shall comeand be voted for. be praised for comedy
I'm 100% positive there are thousands possible name combinations in chinese language. Yet they always chose the name "Ye Chen"
This is a comedic story. The MC is a well renowned scholar (although he seems to not really recognise just how good he actually is). He has been rejected from the cultivation world because of his apparent crappy potential. He joins a sect in debt and is fooled into believing that it is better than it actually is. Although he is a transmigrator who has read his fair share of novels, he clearly doesn't understand how amazing his learning abilities are (although it could be because he's comparing himself to 'true geniuses'). Furthermore, it seems he would have been able to become a cultivator anyway if he just kept on being a scholar for just a little bit longer. But who cares about that? He's the disciple of an 'amazing' sect now!The sect leader at least tries to treat the MC well. Maybe because of a little bit of guilt.Anyway, the novel isn't too bad. Better than the utter rubbish you see every now and then. If there aren't any other novels you really want to see picked, then this novel isn't a bad choice.
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