reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.
Plagiarized name, plagiarized works, plagiarized alts. What even are you? You have nothing to claim and you have no existence in the world of writing.
The idea was good enough but execution not so muchThings just happen without reason at all and come out of nowhere too many skips between storylines it feels like "We are doing this now, oops that's a lie, now we are doing that" it feels really weird to read, a lot of unfinished business.The grammar also doesn't help at allThe character interactions are weirdOverall it feels that things keep changing on a whim rather than planned
Not what I'd usually read, but it's very very good :) The story is really sad but well written. Allaine is well described and fleshed out. Keep it up author :)
Really appreciate it and I liked the character of Roddy so much he is amazingly scared of snakes and other things. Boone is also nice character I wish more twist and turns in it
Such a good novel, sadly I can’t afford it anymore??
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It's able to keep my attention. Just hope that the sister has more scenes. The classmate girl is the typical tsundere which is not bad at all, just the sister is better. Not enough chapters to say much else. Hm. I like that he has the ability to take items out of the game AS WELL as taking them into it. Hope you update more frequently in the future.
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You improved alot since I started reading btw (chapter 5 I think I only remember it still hadn't finished the Divine pill sect part) great improvement and i like the fact that you listen to the community on discord. Congrats on this novel and on being better then demi hahaha.Keep up the good work.
The "Dragon Kingdom" and "Free Kingdom" have me really intrigued. We know in lazy writing like this what they 'represent' lol. MC seems to be have a English name too so lets see how that works!
don't have any words to say just wanted to gave it five star . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .