Well, it's a cultivation novel, so I recommend you keep your standards low. If you do, you'll be pleasantly surprised.
However, keep your standards up to things like Solo Leveling or The Death Mage Who Doesn't Want a Fourth Time and you might be displeased.
Since it's a cultivation novel, pacing is inconsistent, but that's nothing new. Characters are pretty typical, but not to the point of being full on "I'm just here to power level the MC!" stereotypes.
Chapters are released often if you read the first 86 and find you want to continue reading. I stopped here as the novel is just not my cup of tea, being a godforsaken cultivation novel, but others might like it.
That's it I suppose. Really, I just feel meh about this novel. There was a good, entertaining idea going with the characters, but it fell short. It feels like it's more about the strength and fighting and making money and cultivation than it is about the main characters themselves, but I could just be focusing on those parts more.
I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.
Wow, such an amazing read so far. I think it’s a fun read if you want another VRMMORPG past-self reincarnation story. Though it’s Chinese, so be prepare for that writing style and use of tropes. The system is broken and not balanced at all. If the author were a game developer, no one would play his game. The usage of tactics is mediocre. The world is pretty interesting. It's a futuristic setting and the civilization is supposedly space-faring, but the author doesn't really expand on it all too much, which is a shame.
Good book! The start is somewhat plain but it has the perfect elements to hook readers. Give it a go, readers. The cute demon is a cutie, you'll love it!
Author this story is amazing and I really like it. Please continue the story and can you make it a multiverse. Like he will travel to another universe like Attack on Titan, Pacific Rim, Transformer and maybe Godzilla King of the Monster or Godzilla Vs Kong where he meet another Godzilla and maybe help Godzilla when he is in danger like when he fighting Ghidorah or when he fight Mecha Godzilla and also maybe go to Marvel and gather all the 6 infinity stone making him more powerful. I imagine him helping Eren achieve his freedom and also give him a human form so that he can get easier to hide in the world and close to Eren, Mikasa and Armin and maybe [SPOILER] Eren didn't have to die and Mikasa and Eren can live happily together or you can make that Mikasa fall in love with MC. When he is in the Pacific Rim world. You can help the human and also at there you can make MC farm his level, skill point and bio point. I actually don't why I mention transformers except that it has cool giant alien robot. In Godzilla King of the Monster maybe he can travel in that world but way before the start of the fight and when the ancients people see him. They will describe him in the wall as a God and the strongest among the other Titan and when the scene where they found Godzilla Vs Ghidorah or Godzilla Vs Kong picture in the wall. They will found something that is way more dangerous than any Titan they have seen. Something way bigger and stronger than any of the Titan. The true Alpha of the Titan. The King Of All King of Titan. The true God of Titan. They witness a picture of another type of Godzilla but way bigger and stronger then the Godzilla in their world and at the same wall they see a word discribe at wall in ancient language. So many scientists come and try to know the meaning of the world and after many month. They finally know what the world mean. The word describe his name is Josh the Legendary Shin Godzilla and say that he is incarnation of destruction and live as he can destroy any creature and anything in his way and heal and revive any creature that follow him. It also say that he can speak the human language and he has fight countless creature alone by himself and say that he is an immortal being that can never die. When the scientists read this they were shock and scare if the creature. By only reading those word they know how dangerous the creature is and when they see they the last sentence of the world they were shock and scare when they read those word. The word say that giant went into the earth and have fallen asleep into a slumber and they wait for their God to awake again. After they finish reading those word. They immediately sent those word to the higher up and they gather a meeting to find this creature and maybe try to communicate with the creature because it has show that it can speak which mean that it has very high intelligence and maybe comparrible to a human intelligence.I really want to write more thing but the word is already over 3000. I hope you can continue the story and please don't drop the story
Spirit Soul plays a huge role in the Multiverse of my stories. Because of that, I can only recommend my other novels.However, because I'm shameless, I'm gonna say that this is the best story I've written so far.As such, give it a try, and don't have any prejudice against my poor MC :3
Astonishing, the characters are well-written, and it's a fresh concept, I like how you described the situations and scenes, the plot is creative and the book is well-composed! Highly recommended. You have done a great job, keep it up, author
Comment as episode 50.Worth reading. There are some beautiful places but some places are very arrogant. There are very silly fighting parts, especially in that part, it is very shallow to make nonsense review.Also, the dialogue is very wrong, sometimes there is an ambiguous place between the two conversations, it is not clear whether person A or person B is speaking.chapters are also slow.a novel with potential I hope its potential is shown
Interesting plot with cool, intelligent MC. This is definelitely worth reading in my opinion. Also Power system and world building is pretty good.
good. the novel has decent world building that doesn't info dump whilst still giving you the necessary information and the character design is excellent. definitely a hidden gem, the only gripe I have is the updating stability but that is understandable considering the author's work schedule.
It's a normal story, if you're looking for the difference, and quality, it's not for you. Like all MC stories that come out of the land to enter the world of cultivation, our MC has the same aspects of any novel, unique physique, his own cultivation path, prevented from cultivating like everyone else, clearly the most time-consuming and cliché of cultivation. difficult that overcomes several kingdoms above exists. Emotionally unstable, a little cowardly and ungrateful, but sometimes intelligent, that is, not to a definite aspect of personality and depth. In a story you either surpass it by quality or differential, because if it's more of the same, there are many out there with more elaborate and long chapters that show more depth. Investing in cliché and maintaining average quality does not attract the desired attention.
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