Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!
Just one more virtual game story to throw in the pile. The guy reveals his talent to others without an issue, but it's not like it's OP. It relies on luck and the chances are 1 in a million. In fact, all his skills seem to rely on luck and even though he got a 9/10 luck stat, the chances are just too low for any of them. Final recommendation = SKIP! There are better ones in the platform
I like the story and the plot is great. A lot of new character that has interesting personality! Good writing style! Do keep updating when you're free! Keep it up dude~
The only thing I dont like in this story is how slow he progress in mastering his abilities. .. its been 200+ chapters and he is still so weak.. .
So far up until chapter 70+ while he is starting in the academy the story seems interesting. The concept is quite good yet I have a few concerns.The fact that this was reincarnation after being regarded as a "Grandmaster scholar" of some sort you would think that he should have the knowledge needed to exceed every one. The fact that he became like that before reincarnation should entail that he should have at least the ability to increase his white core among other things. Frankly, his having the knowledge of the past even as a "Grandmaster scholar" shows no particular big advantage to him and to the story. With his knowledge of the past he should have exceeded every kid in the academy but it was basically not the case in the story. I see no point of him being that "grandmaster scholar" in his previous life since the story would be no different if he was a simple scholar. Another one is the pattern of the story. To be honest, it was quite predictable. Its full of a sort of down path (the challenges for the MC) when in a good story it goes like rise before going down. In here, he basically experience continous challenges that seems too annoying since the world doesnt work that way no matter how fictional it may be there will always be a "good or awesome even or encounter" so to speak.
It is a good story and I enjoyed the pacing so far would recommend adding in “” around people speaking but it’ goods
It looks good. Not sure. Recently, I saw another similar matriarch cultivator novel where women are treated more favorably than men and men can only do poetry/music. It didn't seem like harem either but how disgustingly they're treated also shows the reality on how women are treated(Probably) Maybe girls did starve to death just to wait for boys to finish their plate first?? I'm too lazy to go to my history and get the raws though
Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work.recommended:),
I don't know why this is rated so low but in my opinion this is one of the best out of the recently released batch. Excellent humor, creative system, and unique plot!
Great book. So far I enjoyed it as it's standard is good. Keep on working like this author. I really admire this book??????????????
going to restart the book from the beginning.... praying author keeps with it because its one of my top 5 webnovels and I really want to see where the story goes