It a time backflow right? It is not the past?
translation only but the novel itself is completed
Well this was my first webnovel
The storyline is pretty interesting. It's good, but the ending seemed a bit unfinished. However, it's a pretty good story overall. The only big issue to warn people about, and hopefully this gets re-edited; is the syntax. It causes A LOT of misunderstandings while reading. Pronouns, sentence structure and character names are all in a jumbled mess. Honestly if my brain didn't comprehend English sentence structures it would be hard to piece a lot of what is written into something understandable. If the story wasn't pretty good, I would have stopped reading. This definitely is worth a re-edit.
Truly an amazing story, The author has done a amazing job with his world building. I hope your story reach great heights, by the way the book cover is amazing
we otakus approve of this novel ????????????????????
Peak fiction Fr fr. Can wait for NTJnovels to get back on his grind. Highly recommend for people who likes easy reading
I really enjoy this novel! The Snu-Snu is great. The system, while simplified to only have HP and MP as stats instead of including things like Strength, Magic, Agility, or Defense, work well within that framework. The system is actually interesting and provides a lot of depth for combat and not just sexual stuff. My only complaint with the system is that it doesn't go far enough. Anon has the ability to steal skills with his Memory Eater ability, which makes sense. He also has the ability to merge skills into stronger ones. What baffles me is that he hardly uses these abilities at all! There are many instances where he has an opportunity to absorb someone's memories and get new skills to grow stronger, and he just doesn't. As of chapter 156, he got a blessing that lets him learn skills of any class, so I hope he uses this ability more often. Maybe that was a way to explain why he didn't absorb their memories. Maybe he wouldn't have gotten any skills out of it perhaps? IDK. But please lean into the skill stealing aspect of the story more. The grammer does have some problems, but English is not the author's first language, so I'm willing to be lenient. Plus, he said that he got an editor that would correct the mistakes, so that's even better. And the grammar isn't even that bad to begin with. Overall, I'm excited to see more!
Okay here comes the great review of self proclaimed Master Blaster Plaster Trasher... Ugh... I guess I got a little self burn... Ahem Anyway here comes review after I read first five chapters.Pros Of Novel:1- The detailing of characters are great. Emma Fisher already became my Waifu and Alex and Ravi are best male characters. Lucy is still vaguely discribe but not every character can be discribed in just 5 chaps.2- The plot is intriguing. All these things like it's futurestic yet there ain't much need to describe atmosphere is what makes reading iy convenient.3- Till now, none of the chapter is anything boring. They piqued interest and were able to maintain that.(No even I can do that... I can't do anything though)Now onto the Cons:Well there ain't much maybe cuz it's beginning or maybe it's just that good but here are some suggestions.... Try to maintain world building. The surrounding the crowd and even tiny things like rooms and halls. Even though it looks like there ain't any need to do that now and story is interesting. If you suddenly started world building all at once, it will become hard as well as boring. So If yoh start doing it now irrespective of whether it's needed or not with interesting stories still there, I think it would help you in long run.So Finally My 5 Start review cuz there ain't any flaws for now at leat.
before you start this novel just dont take this novel seriously because there are many plot holes and missing information.I also think the author likes to drag things on like those fashion show that appear every chapter, to the point that there more fashion shows then actual story.
Rom-com story with OP female lead, haven't seen any struggle but only fluff and FMC spoiling the MC. It is good to read and I give me lot of laughs. Almosta NPC are humorous, you should give it a try.
Really inspiring and interesting..I think it'll be the most rated novel in the future. Love Thomas character seems bit funny. Rejected piece hahaha.