hmm how to say this... Let's see, it's normal for authors to be inspired by a story to create their own story. The problem was that the author was too inspired by TAP (The Author's POV). The beginning has several elements similar to TAP, and when there are so many similar elements, comparisons are inevitable. To be honest, if you read this story without knowing TAP, you will probably think: "hey, this is a good story". But if you know TAP... as I said, the comparison is inevitable. Let's start with writing. The author needs to improve in this area. It is readable but needs improvement. For me, who use google translate, the errors get worse. Reading the story I think Lucas is not an extra. Lucas is versatile using sword, daggers and powerful magic. He is OP. Lucas is not stupid but also not smart (compared to the MC of TAP). He works hard and trains a lot. He doesn't stay discreet for long. So far there are almost 0 human interactions with the other races. I hope there will be some change soon. At the moment, I believe Lucas is too stuck in the human realm. There are very interesting mysteries in the work about the protagonist's family, evil cults, super powerful beings, gods... This is very good.It seems the author is very wary of Lucas' interaction with other girls. It's as if the author thought: "Lucas is very hot. It's very difficult to write him interacting with other girls of his age without them throwing themselves into his arms". For example, Rose is Fredrick's love interest from the beginning. Nearly 200 chapters and Lucas' interaction with Rose is zero. I do not understand this. I really feel that the author is very cautious about including girls in the story. I don't know if this story will be a harem or not (I must admit that when the mc is as amazing as Lucas, with the potential to be the emperor of everything, I prefer a humble harem of 2 or 3 girls. After all, the good seed has to be spread hehehe The protanonist, the girls and humanity win and are happy) but I ask the author to include female friendships. Come on, aren't there any girls with potential that the mc wants to include in his group? This may even serve to make the princess feel some jealousy and realize her feelings for Lucas. To conclude, although the beginning has many elements similar to TAP, the author begins to take his own direction in the future in his work. I believe this story has good potential and that the author is getting better. It is very enjoyable to read and I recommend it to everyone. Just don't compare it too much to TAP and I guarantee you'll have fun reading it.I hope this review has helped in some way. Keep up the good work, author-san XD
This novel is great, i love it and i hope that this will be updated soon.. i've been waiting for a few weeks but it still wasn't updated.. O'great god Author i beg you for an updates...
I can't wait to read this it sounds like a great book I love video games but I wish it was a comic book be case the pictures would bring it to life and would help me imagine it better and I love the name and is full of adventure and life I hope people looking forward to it as well as me but I like comic books I hope I like it
Merchants are always at risk in the hope of cutting a big "jackpot." If they succeed, they make a profit of 500 or even all 1000 percent. But the risk is very high with 10 caravans going along the Silk Road, three of them have been robbed. It was necessary to pay for the protection of the “bandits”, to buy the “tamga”, the security seal. From the first chapter, the author managed to generate interest in the novel. Read on ...The mistake of the authors is that they describe past eras, approach them from the point of view of modernity. That is, do not "enter
This story is a hidden Gem. Of all cultivation stories out there, this one kinda hits home. Like a children's book call 'The Jungle Book', but for cultivation. Truly interesting. If i knew more of the world I would give a full 5 stars but i only read like 10 chapters. But if the rest of the story is like the first 10 in quality....then GOD BLESS THIS AUTHOR, Editor, and or translator. So i will give 5 stars in hope the rest of the story is just as Great.
Attractive summary..hmmmm...its got my attention??Veery very very much into reading this novel?? HAH!? 4 sure i'll give this novel a good try I mean I have been looking for a goodstory. I think this is a novel I will find to be a good read in the end right? RIGHT❗???heehee
The beginning was terrible and forced humor. But it does get better after 30 chapters or so. I want this Translated just for the sake of who the Author is. Sure his previous work wasn't the best but I can also see improvement in his writing. Characters feel better and more alive.
Absolutely loved the story. I just wished we could see Man and Type develop as well. But overall beautiful
really good novel with an amizing idea and good writing, there are nearly no grammar mistakes, could think this was an chinese/japanese novel if i didn’t know it was an original, really good novel do recommend
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Naive, dumb type MC.Some forced Plot armor.Cliche bg story, forced plot sometimes.Character development not so good, shallow to medium.Unnecessary characters.Many Plot holes (kidnapping, idiotic lies & others).This Novel has a great potential, change some plots, redraw MC & other important chars, write a new one.
Solid three this a great read for noobs, but only newbies. Need more work too much description dialogue that is easily forgettable........................