The story is very exciting, and quite fresh for me...........................................................................................
From the little that has been published, It seems interesting and is a fun read. I hope the author continues it as it had potential. I won't give a high rating yet since there isn't enough chapters.
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Just a correction: Ik it says its 5 chaps/week right now, but we r actually releasing 5 per day for the first week and at least 2 per day after that. The 5chap/week was just the default and QI forgot to change it. Also for the odd paragraphs, there's something wrong with the QI translator/editor platform that's just adding new paragraphs everywhere. I will try my best to fix it and in the mean time, plz bare with us
Author here.This isn't a review post but rather an appreciation post.I want to thank all the readers for giving this book a chance, but I can promise you that it only gets better.So stick around, let's enjoy this ride together.
This first couple arcs are a fantastic tale of industry intrigue and competition. There are awesome set pieces, mystery, exciting battles, all of which contribute to the overall plot. The second half is just a Star Trek rip off that even the protagonist can wait to end. Its boring, and has no clear weight on the main plot. There no stakes, no mech designs, no other fun characters (except Ketis way later) This isn’t the first time I’ve seen an author shoot there story in the foot by introducing a long and, at the end of the day, waste of time arc. Maybe theres a huge pay off at the end, but several hundred chapters to get there means you’re milking the story for your readers money more than advancing the plot.
lovely story. nice write up
very interesting writer...pls keep posting.....some people reading should at least comments on this novel to encourage our writer. she should know your thought about this novel I. ......
I want to know what becomes of Mildred eventually. Kudos to the writer.
I’m just starting to read it I love it so far and I wish she would end up with cai
So good, love all your stories
Loved this series!