Very very slow story.No action for lots of chapters.To much detail for everything feels more like trying to increase word count.Boring to read for more then 5chapters.Will try again when I develop more patience
10/10 reccomend. its pretty funny on how hard mc screws up on being an antagonist. I really hope they dont drop this book because so far its a really good read
need more, please come backthe monotone convos with a hint of emotion is great<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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So far, so good, World building is easy, as we know most of our world anyway, and the system hints at a much bigger supernatural side....I feel like it could go to an universal scale.The story is ....well non-existent at this point. We're just seeing the character develop at the start, no over-arching plot has yet been revealed but that's fine at this point of the story. (chapter 24)The characters do unfortunately leave me a bit wanting, as I've currently barely remember anyone besides zach.Also the writing style is horrendous....what's with the main characters dialogue starting with a period? I can't understand whether it's inner monologue or dialogue.Still interested to see more of it
hey ,your story is really n1 to read i found it a few days before.I dont can tell the end direction of your story @ the moment but the setting ist really n1 .I like it because it´s not like this "Normal Gameing Novel" like Legendary Guardian or so.Hope that you can bring more Updates to your novel that i can see your creator Path.mfg Kamu
Too much dry information about various tower facilities being what level, and as usual mc is a dickless virgin who runs away from sex..... Whats the point of having a obedient female harem when u keep writing about a dickless vegetarian mc ??? However this are only minor issues so i minus only half a point... The story itself is mostly base development and hero development.... It is interesting with good pacing and i am looking forward to read more.
The story is good... until suddenly became premium without any previous notice .................... aaarghhhh.............. oh my godd..................................................................................................................
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Author: Cuttle Fish that loves DivingLvl of Author: PlatinumNotable Works: Throne of Magical Arcana and Martial Arts MasterWebsite: Qidian CNStatus: CompletedViews: 9.38+ millionRecommendations: 2.72+ millionChapters: 1430+Rating: 9.4/10 by 1317 readersComments/discussion: 2454A Xuanhuan novel by 'Cuttle Fish that loves Diving', what can I say except that I'm looking forward to it..........
By far the most underrated novel on Webnovel, it's a Er Gen so you know your in for a great ride. If you have read the other Er Gen's book, and hav'nt read this one... START READING IT !
This sh!t should be good if you don't include the female teacher who constantly harassing MC everytime she meets him and MC who just keep accept the abuse and saying "she's good girl and good seedling to become an alchemist