it gets better later on
arc 5 chapters 1-40 are missing
I've read some trash before but this is definitely in my top 10 of complete garbage
Samira is the best wife, anyone who disagrees is wrong! Look, what a perfect woman! jokes aside, I came from the main novel, honestly the quality is very similar despite finding some chapters short, I recommend reading it, it's very simple and fun
The story is great overall but could use some minor improvements here and there.
The characters are great and most of them (the important ones at least) are likeable.
I don't know if it's a me thing,but sometimes I feel overwhelmed with information during the explanation parts.So basically, reading this was not a mistake.I really liked the personality of the main character so I loved the story.
Verry nice and verry good,, its good to read
Oh . the Heart of this story is amazing It just draws in the best of a novel . I really liked ready it .
Needs more background. No idea on the aliens or psychic power. Feels like the author forgot what they were talking about. Then the author started adding their comments about how they need to speed up. They constantly spoil their own work by saying what is happening next. It feels like half their novel got shuffled out of order of events. For free reading ok, but it got too painful to read at chp30
average American Chinese wannabe no substance
This shid is good. Way too good in my opinion. Makes me wish I had a time travel machine so I could go to the future and read more.
It was a fairly entertaining read, and I am looking forward to how the story will develop, though I am a sucker for military themed content.One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
At first when I checked the synopsis I thought that this was basically a Harry Potter romantic comedy. But i deeply regret even reading the first chapter. The very idea of crippling a baby fills me with fury, even more so when it's done out of supposed love.