the arc to mc fighting is dumbly long. i dont know what else could make me dislike this novel beside that arc ...............................
Personally, this isn't my type of story id like to sit down and read. However, this story is well crafted. Being articulated very well. Were shown very early how the mother and father of the Protagonist, both have underlying habits and flaws, that in retro speck would make any toxic family worse. This alone helps us see why our protagonist ends up the way he does. Instead of overcoming it in a good way, being a good samaritan because his life was crummy. He thinks of himself first and foremost. The book as a whole is good, and I'm sure many people would enjoy it if given the chance at reading it!
I like this story a lot hopefully it continues. Simply because of how fun is to imagine going into manga and novels to alter them. I also quite like the MC sure she is ordinary at the moment, but with her ability she'll become extraordinary. Since I already like the MC it's gonna be hard to find a flaw in her form me at least.With my rambling done. I only read up to chapter 21, but I'm not planning on updating this review. Unless I end up really really hating it later.In short I only wrote this to rate 5 stars.
Shameless author here, this is my first novel, i hope you guys like it. Any serious reviews will be much appreciated, ill try to meet your expectations the best i can, i wont make them a priority tho, its my novel after all.
You see, we need quality, not quantity.
Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember. Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try
I first thought that it would be just *** and the story will lag, but surprisingly the story is more interesting and the plot holds itself, the *** stuff is secondary. Characters are well developed and even the tertiary characters are nicely portrayed which in turn seamlessly binds the story, plot and the characters.Thank you for writing this.
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Good novel hope u can make more suprise keep it up wait for more ?????????????????????????????? moreeeeeeeeeeeeweeeweeeeeeeee
Always love ur stories keep up the good work !!! I always end up wanting more so heres me contributing to the bonus chappie Needed more letters
I love the character names a lot , specially jayden ......
I was hooked but I thought it would have ended differently