This review is based on my first impression about the novel, evaluating bookcover, synopsis, tags and first chapter.For this reason, I'll edit it in the future.First things first, no problem with the bookcover, definitely eyecatching.The writing quality is really high and the errors of grammars, typos, etc. can be counted on one hand , for this reason I would add an extract to the synopsis to make it more engaging.I didn't give five on the writing because in the past I read a more immersing, dictionary-rich, without typos story.The update frequency Is really high(I'm genuinely curious how many daily writing hours does the author have in his routine).The pace of the speed Is fast but at a appreciable point and the final of chapter incourages binge reading. ?In the first chapter 7 characters spoke (3 from m.c. family, stalker, m.c. girlfriend and gorilla couple) so there wasn't the physical space to make an interesting profile of a character but, I decided for 5 stars for the variety of personalities and the short and efficient descriptions.From the first chapter, reading the tags, this could be exchanged for any other isekai story but I decided to leave 4 stars because the descriptions of the locations are very detailed and add value to the litteral world in the background of m.c.'s story.Finally, in the complex the read is strongly recommended.
It’s……. Not for me. But all the best author…. **and i skipped chap 27 too. Tee hee hee**
Lovely novel. Can’t wait to read more chapters
Thanks for really making something slow paced but also interesting in lookism. I really really loved it. The way it has been started and the way it is continuously updated.... Its amazing
Light and fun story, keep it up. Lots of potential to explore, like the champions' stories and their out-of-game skills.The only thing I thought was a little bit strange is they were weak? E-Rank creature are they being defeated?......................................................................................................................................................................................
Hi, author here. Shamelessly here to thank my 3 readers.Thank you for reading my book and giving it a chance. Promise to not let you down.Everyone else please give my book a chance. ??
Writing Quality: Typos and basic word mistakes.Updates: Regular UpdatesStory Development: Aside from a skip of years at times the story is progressing smoothly without any jarring parts. Character Design: The MC personality seems overly concerned with the state of the world despite what appears to be her personality. World Background: Solid world building and magic design.The overall writing style is simple and easy to understand. Typical Demon Lord plot with a twist. The storytelling is easy going and doesn't get you attached to the MC early on but it seems to work. Sometimes the chapters have several paragraphs from previous chapter I guess to make their word count which lost a lot of points with me personally. Will be looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. Good work author san.
Unconfident and shameless review by the Author here!This novel entails the main theme of uncovering mysteries and finding out the truth of the world. Whether it be lost history, secret mysteries, and missing truth, the story will revolve around uncovering them.Thus! Comes the main character, Veritas! He is a history lover and always loves to go on adventures to, figure out the truth.Along the story he encounters creatures of mythic, Seraphims, Demons, Creatures from the Depths, many more! The world's power system focuses on the limits of the Soul. Those that have reached for their Soul are called as Pathbearers! They are capable of utilizing the runes, Attunement, Soul Rank, Soul Storage, and etc...As Veritas ascends his Soul, the mysteries around him get deeper and deeper. However, he must be careful not to pry deeper..
So far, so good, love ma a Anti Hero mc ?, I love forward to seeing how the mc developes in the future, the pacing is also pretty good so far. Keep it up
i would give this novel a chance, still new as of this review. Though it has a lot potential to become one of my favorites. It has done some interesting things and will constitute to do so. if you are looking for something that is not a cliche, i suggest giving this a chance.
Author when are you coming back?? Honestly i wish you'd update at least once a month is okay......author we miss you plz do come back and i love the characters and the story development. Hope to hear from you soon dear Author??
So far so good, 6 chapters in and no major problems. I will update review once we reach 20 chapters, but overall a solid start so keep it up author