Suprisingly the translation quality is pretty good but thats pretty much everything praiseworthy for this novel.I read 5 chapters and the story is about a pet trainer with a system? (the translation calls it that) which is basicly only a translator that lets it hear the thoughts of pets and gives it missions/ rewards to for basic quest The story is pretty basic but boring because the mc has no goals/ resolutions besides becoming a pet trainer (not even something cliche as getting stronger since his parents died mysteriously)The character design? whats that? can you eat it? It doesnt describe the mc at all and only gave a basic description of the female childhood friend (fair, tail and heroic with a ponytail..)World background: Who needs that if you can have faceslaps and gender bias instead.. The female childhood friend and a man called his pet lousy and he is completely enraged at the guy and didnt even care about his friend saying the same. Hes also "forced" to faceslap at a training center because no one believes his "lousy pet" to be strong and everyone needs to comment how bad he is.The only thing (its not even mentioned properly) is that pets need 5 stars to get to the next stage
Dont judge or insult me, and I wont judge or insult you.I'm here for both the plot and incest tag.The idea of Demi-God Protagonist who desires revange against douch-bag Zeus, his own father.And the idea that MC will actually against Olympian Gods is interesting.
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The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one.Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
This is so stupid and even if the mc is over 1000 years old he has the mentality of a child. The novel is just to stupid no point in reading this.
I look forward to this book I will definitely read it. hopefully it will get selected or released soon so I can read it. Don't stop trying to write this one it seem very good.
Don't waste your time.This novel is Webnovel edition of 'I transmigrated into another world and proceeded to live my life as a worthless maggot until the end of my days.'
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Great novel! At first it starts as your generic xianxia with arrogant reincarnation, arrogant young masters, revenge plots, etc. But then you actually see character and people with a first reaction other than 'he is more talanted then me lets kill him'. In general, its a pretty fun novel and worth a try
Well. It doesn't seem bad till Chapter 25 but what I'm worried about the most is that these detective novels tend to be hard to write and capsizes easily. I don't want to see the day when our mc is superhuman that can jump 30 meters and the enemies are cultivators/martial artists from a mysterious criminal organization.
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