This has potential to be like top providence secretly cultivate for 1000 years so check it out hope it’s not trash past 20 chapters
Been wanting some more Xianxia novels so I hope this is picked.Although the cheat isn't something exactly original, the author as up to 20 chapters has managed to make the story not seem cliche compared to other novels of this style and seems to fleshing out a unique story which I quite enjoyed.If the author keeps up this quality and doesn't fall into a repetitive loop this could be a a very good novel.
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Read chapter 16 and decide if you can cope up with the rest of it, if it's your cup of tea, then by all means, have fun. If not, do not bother wasting time.
I have really enjoyed reading this book. I hope you will resume updating the story soon. As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!??
This shizz real good. But i see a problem with world building in earth. My solution to that is let nexus train eddie even if it's just a glimpse every arc from eddies perspective. Just so we understand more about the current earth.
I had a great time reading this story. The optimism that Michu exhibits is a really fresh perspective along with the direction of his growth. Story has great moments and can really make you feel for the characters at times. I enjoyed my read.
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Please give this book a chance. The characters are really enjoyable and the plot moves along necessary. This is one of my favorite VRMMO novels.
Don’t remember too much just that in the later parts it gets boring and I dropped it other than that is is a very good and focused story about our evil Mc just wanting more power.
Really good novel from Mao Ni. The main characters are really likeable and the even the antagonists are likeable and understandable. However the story is a little slow paced at the start as it focuses more on world building and character development. The story becomes really amazing later on and the language used in the story is fantastic.
Author this Is a good story but when are you going to update more chapter or have u dropped the boom