Very good reading and worth to repeat reading it!
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The story is good, pacing is too, power up good, still no waifu material to be found, not too fast paced haha there is even a reference anyway all is good except for the update stability not good but its still doable its just that waiting a story this good hurts especially in a good chapter i recommend yall read this......
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After reading chapter 78, I had an assumption, I'm not sure if it's false or true, but I think that Chronos and mc are the same person, that is, in mythology Chronos is the name of the God of Time, and logically it could be any of the later versions of mc. And why I think so, it's because of too many coincidences, he has too obvious "Plot power" thanks to which he "accidentally" meets more and more familiar people. Also because of the words of his "system" or, more correctly, his daughter, she said that Chronos is much stronger than Nero, but when asked "who will win the battle
I'll be real, the story premise is really good. The only problems are constant change of POV, OOP flashbacks and redundant POV. If I describe this novel, it's like holding a bunch of strings with varying lengths with POV attached to the end and dragged onwards to create a story...
read three chapters and all three were awful. I already know i can't handle the MC and it's unlikely he's going to change much especially considering how the prologue introduced from his point of view, the story. the FMC is fine and would probably be better if it was from her perspective. going to read a few more but so far everything that's been written that I have read is just what seems to be 2/3rds random thoughts of his and then the other 1/3 him being a failure/trying to be a side character. maybe it's just preference that I always hate novels that decide to have a MC have side character syndrome.
One of the best if not the best original story on this site recommend for all reader that like Op MC, eye power, xanxia, fantasy setting with mage/warrior, op background for M, time/space power , harem
As a rookie author myself i hope your novel does well and you enjoy writing. All the best on the trails ahead.As a reader, I found the premise of your story to be very intriguing, especially with the heavenly tribulation origins. The world has potential for intrigue and grabbing someone's attention. I appreciate the creativity.As for the con, the conversations between the characters are not organic, making it feel unreal and stiff. Also, the transition between the different scenes seemed a little rushed. In my eyes, your novel has potential as long as you work on the interactions and the pacing. Those are my humble two cents as a reader. All the best!!!