ChaitanyaJaiswal
Gosu bueno la obra esta chida, pero solo hago la reseña para subir de nivel xd y piden 140 caracteres, sigo escribiendo porque aun no me deja publicr
I like the storyline and how the practioner gradually proceeds towards achieving his growth in realms. LONG TAO is a great character.I would recommend all to read this
Dropped it around chapter 300. This story really had potential to be great, and the MC's plot device was the most unique I had ever seen. The translations are horrible and feels half assed, which is my main concern.
thought it would be good but its really quite boring---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Seriously one of the best story I've read in webnovel, the start is rough but the writing style is consistent, the story is good with an actual backstory and with interconnected karma and other shenanigans, it's actually become a dang good reading material! love the comedy, love the drama, a very good slice of life, keep reading it folks! And you won't be disappointed.
seriously, too lazy writing.MC completely loses track of himself as soon as author wants something to change.MC claims to be one way, clearly is nothing like he describes himself.faceslap wind-ups are more than a full chapter long and the actual faceslaps are not creative at all and involve all logic to be thrown out the window just to even make it have more than negative impact.this novel really disappointed me.
The chapters haven't been rewritten despite the plot being full of holes, mc being a complete idiot because of someone is the opposite gender, very inconsistent mc. Overall this is rated way too high, a three star at most due to it being written well with no or not many grammatical errors. It might be better in later chapters but that doesn't matter if you can't stomach the earlier ones which are painful to read.
good novel one of the best I read so far let's see how many girls he can get at the end of this novel...........................................
I have high expectations for this story after reading Synopsys, was a good idea and initially was not too bad, but after reading the story, I have one word for it ---- b *******Nice concept but, the story is not up for it .....the entire novel began to decline from the current MC chose to get power for reasons that stupid, absurd and bizarre ??awesome story ideas but marred by the writer's inability to write something coherent.
Good for stress relief...................................................................................................................
i love this novel please keep updating and hope it will be selected
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