At first i dropped this book twice but after that it started get affect me and i couldn't stop, You could hate some certain FL's but they become cuter later on, But it was a waste that they couldn't get enough time there is a serious harem potential here but its lacking apart from that mc was very stupid at first but he becomes better later on story and he was similar to certain mc that i couldn't remember his name but better version of it and i didn't mind grammar too much since i'm a person that not too great with grammars myself and My biggest complaint is chapters comes too slow ):
I have been waiting for an update for a while now and I genuinely like this novel I hope that it keeps updating regularly.
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Based on the first 40 chapters, I approve of this novel. At times I am not too sure though, it's still too early to say how it pans out. But MC behavior/personality suits my tastes, things are not overly complicated, the simplicity isn't boring or repetitive. I'll maybe check MTL and see how it goes later on.
Nice good but I like medieval times better, with no modern technology. Why do I want to read about things that already exists. Well other then that it's a really good novel with nice grammar and stuff
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Very ? ? updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
Great book author! The writing style has no flaws that I could fin, the story is pretty great to read and the characters are well developed as well. Looking forward to more chapters for sure.
I have a question, is there gunna be an update schedule or is it just gunna be random releases? I would love to know, it would be really helpfull. ?
Highly recommend this novel as it is a very fun read. Plus so far it has elements of gaming (without the level system so its not annoying) and focused on warriors, mages, and blacksmithing. And the best part is, apart form the slight choppiness in the first chapter, the rest of the chapter flow smoothly, and the world building is done slowly but at a good pace too so it reads like a western novel at times
The story is a bit fast paced but I think it has good potential so good work, cant wait to see where it goes.???????????????????????????
When I first started to read this book there were some parts that I disliked. The way the system bond influences emotion is pretty bad, however, the characters are all pretty good and while they do have flaws there presented in a likeable way. The descriptions for fights and other things are also good, they’re pretty much at a level that can reach the peak you can get from novels like these. Overall i would recommend trying it out, if you dislike the first few chapters I would recommend braving a few more as while there are definitely some bad parts it gets much better later on.