The story seems promising. I don't know why you stopped. I hope you continue someday. The plot twists were really well-constructed. Good luck man
Reading the first few chapters, the first battles, reminded me of one of my fav books, Life Hunter, and I like it. I look forward to more interesting action-pack adventures ahead. I have big expectations author but know you will do your best to meet them. Nice work? waiting for more
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Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me.You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth)MC is really concieted and quite stupid. if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)
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Nice book!Please read mine as well! Check my original work titled HEAVENS SLAYER.Sorry for shameless self promotion !!! !! ! !! !! !! !!! !! !! !!!! !! !!! !! !! !!!
Shameless author review. This has been a fun story to write. I've written it in the style of a "script" to have it turned into a comic by a close friend of mine. I see this in my head as a comic. I hope everyone is staying safe and healthy!
Excellent story, we'll write as well, I am not a fan of sci fic, but this story got me interested. Not going to lie, the story has potential, and I love the way it gathers the reader's attention. Excellent work, author, and keep up!