I don't really enjoy reading this because it's too detailed lol even when fighting, there are so many bullsh*t that joining and disrupting the battle to the point that it's ruining the hype. The author really made a bad decision there.
Please drop more chapters, this story is a masterpiece.
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-There are numerous typos in the story and the author often forgets plots that he himself defined. Things like a character appearing at the same time in two different places, the author copying and pasting a notification and forgetting to edit it, or even forgetting some effect of the protagonist's main skills. The author puts so much information and so many skills that he can't manage his own story.-The distance from the world makes no sense, sometimes the author shows the protagonist traveling to a certain location kilometers away with an army of thousands of soldiers and this march takes only a few hours, when in fact it should take days or weeks.-The protagonist accumulates countless useless skills that he never uses. And the skills are so scattered and random that it's evident the author didn't plan anything.-The protagonist's main class is the martial artist, but he has never fought a single opponent in 200 chapters and none of his skills have to do with his class. And even if "classes" exist in history, it is possible to learn skills that have nothing to do with the character class.-The drop system is broken and makes no sense, putting things like 0% drop just to conveniently work with the protagonist's talent: 100% drop rate. If the drop is 0% this item simply shouldn't exist.-The protagonist accumulates countless items with his 100% drop talent, but these items are so large in quantity that they just gather dust and are never used efficiently. (Like protagonist's skills)-The loyalty system makes no sense, literally, people are only loyal to the protagonist because of a talent that forces these people to become loyal, It has nothing to do with the protagonist's effort. They are like slaves with brainwashing.-No death consequences in battles. The protagonist has countless soldiers, but because of his talent he manages to revive them all whenever a battle takes place, so all soldiers are essentially immortal.In the end, I had fun reading the first few chapters, but after 200 chapters I got bored and felt like it wasn't worth it.(And I feel that the novel is written by AI)
Not a bad story. Just wish there was a little more in the beginning about how he got the system and why.
One of the better slice of life mmorpg titles out there. Although there is not much to judge yet I am finding this to be refreshing and well written. Kudos to the author keep it up!
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This novel may be good for some a people , but for me it's NOT. Because I don't like novels where MC are full of ignorance.................................................................
The book is only just started and one can easy relate with it already. A beautiful plot all together that will get you interest and eager to read more. Great job Author!
i really like this book.i dont know if you mind the less number of readers but i believe that this book will be readed by many people soon
using the Chinese name instead of the English name is confusing. anyone his first meet with Shania? what chapter?
Typical Chinese beta simp doormat, fake harem trash.