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looks awesome but probaly wont get picked so people whats the raw before its gone?
Chapter 355, Finally captures all of his small island..Then we find out that there are 3 other locations 1 further than the last with more powerful people.. also, him in his prime was only top dog in the second location.. middle-earth..It has taken him 1 whole year just for 1 expansion and that just reached middle-earth.. but, the other locations are aparently even further..It starts with;- Eastern Frontier (Currently where he starts from)- Middle Earth (Where the 12 Yama's lived)- South Wilderness (Where Demons are)- Beimang / North Mang (Unknown Land with Stronger people)Each 1 taking longer to get to.. it has taken over 300 chapters just to arrive at Middle-Earth..Power Levels;- 1 to 9 Realms are only in Eastern Frontier..- 10 to 13 Realms Are only in Middle Earth (Called Realm 1 to 4)- The 12 Yama's were only Realm 3 and 4.. (12 and 13)- No difference in powers.. just only same realm kills same realm except Yama's can fight 1 realm higher..I'm stopping at chapter 355.. GL to anyone who reads further..
I'm reviewing this based on the page I stopped in which is chapter 20(4.4). This is really awesome and one of the best book here. At first, I didn't know it was a magical book since I did not read the synopsis. I was directly teleported to the first page, I would like to say I'm in love already with the characters. Especially Alina.The way you describe the characters and scenes are well detailed and you are good at word building. Your grammar is incredible too.
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I read the first chapter and was strongly reminded of a Korean drama by the name of "Fall in love with me" and the first chapter is what happened in the first episode is this a fan fiction?! I'll read further but the chapter titles are telling me its following the kdrama story if they were in a fantasy world not a bad thing but not really your story as it were you even took from the title of drama as well "fall for me.
I like the change up from the normal storylines. I feel for him as an AI, I would probably have the same issues if I was an AI. The flow and actions from one chapter to the next make it hard to stop reading. I ran across a couple minor grammar errors, but nothing to distract from the story.
Common story with overused elements. Only using the hype of the game pubg to get people to read it. Pathetic to say the least, story is bland, with terrible worldbuilding. Characters have one dimensional personalities that make people wonder if they even have a brain.
Honestly it's Soo bad and a blatant copy of the other but this with zombie with other novel concept but still that novel was treash too so this combined ultra mega trashhh I wish I can rate more
Voted because want to troll people ( already know this novel just another "creative" novel) and looking over angry mob now,it just worth it :g and five stars for the review angry mob shows
is there a point in reading a story that is on hiatus/dropped on 300th chapter? better invest time in something else. too many novels are paused/dropped in china these days...