I NEED MOAR!!!!!IT IS SUCH A FUN READ!!!MC is not only the creator of the game, but also a player! Although MC is never the strongest player, he is still one of the strongest. Side characters are fun to read about and there are no arrogant young masters!The game is always expanding and the player limit problem gets solved very quickly! I give this a massive recommendation and I hope that more will get translated in the future!You will get my energy stones and hopefully my power stones.
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Compared to the 'First' novel, this novel's quality is lower..... It seems to me that this is just added flavor after the end of the king's avatar novel.What I expect when I saw the novel is a 'real' prequel..... Of course what I expect to see is when Ye Xiu decided to run from home to play games to meeting Su siblings then to their rise in glory and then the creation of esports of glory then to the creation of team excellent era of course with Tao Xuan, Manager Cui, Ye Xiu, Su Mu Qiu (from a group of people from a computer shop to pro team) and Wu Xuefeng and to Su Mu Qiu's death and then to Ye Xiu's resolve to win championship for them....This is what a prequel is (IMO) and not a how-they-meet-up and time-skips of fight....Also because of the many time skips, there are many feelings and emotions that aren't portrayed just like how Butterfly Blue portrayed the feelings and emotions of the players in the middle of the novel......It felt that this novel is kinda rushed, just like the ending of the novel of origin....I'm really disappointed given the hype of this new novel after the ending of the mother novel....*sigh~~But still, all in all, I will still continue to read this since my score has nothing to do with the fact that I WANT MORE OF KING'S AVATAR!!And the enjoyment I got is still higher than what my score suggests....What my score meant is my disappointment in my rant above.. ༼☯﹏☯༽
The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.
It's good idea, as many of Webnovel's book, but story itself, and it's characters, are unsatisfying.Not to mention problems with lack of proper editing/proofreading, which is annoying because those random name and little mistakes aren't hard to fix, but are overall irritating.
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started on this a few months ago and literally used all my fast passes and coins to catch up to 10 chapter privilege. don't regret it one bit. love the cultivation, harem, fights, and while sorta slow at the start the growth rate speeds up nicely later on. by far my fave cultivation, harem novel on WN
Is the collapse of Webnovel soon? It seems like six months ago it was perfectly fine but now we are getting 1/3rd the chapters of half the usual amount of books per week, most of which are trash-tier copycat novels from faloo or are just plain bottom-of-the-barrel racist trash.I can hardly even remember any books this year in trial read that had above a 3.5 rating after a week. And that’s honestly hard to achieve with Webnovel’s bots and behind-the-scenes manipulation.
This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background.Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc.Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo.Story Development: 3.2/5Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc.Character Design: 3.5/5It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story.This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it.When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya?
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I love the plot of the novel it very interesting am eagerly waiting for the novel release. I can't wait for the release of this novel am looking forward to it ????????
Shameless author here.To readers, thanks for reading my story or even just the synopsis of my story. It's actually nothing great, cliches, grammar mistakes, name it, it's here. I wrote this for fun so don't expect anything great. I'm no professional author, so updates will be regular as long as I'm free and motivated. Thanks for understanding. Ciao.