i love it, the world and story is almost unique , he got the type of accumulating powera i love the most
Love this book, can wait to see what happens next
Buena narrativa.. la forma en que describe y expresa los lugares, emociones y sentidos del los personajes. muy buena.Altamente recomendado..
The writing is cringe and bad in the fist 50 chapters it switches between he and her randomly and there is so much sex its annoying and is not necessary to the story and the author makes the character a cold blooded killer to humans whith no mercy which is annoying and the whay the characters speak is not how you whould expect them to its like the author was trying to be funny and cute but it just came off as strange and not natural to the situation and the author is adding so many unnecessary details so its hard to keep track of which direction the auther is trying to take the story
WHAT TO EXPECT1. Rpg style (1st and 3rd POV) Story telling2. VRMMORPG, Rebirth, Adventure, Fantasy, Action, School Life3. Romance. NO Harem 4. OP MC5. Cold MC. Only kind to people he caresENTRY TO WPC 270.If you like the story consider giving a review and vote with PS. Regular updates will start if this novel win ? ?
It has been a loooooooong while since we‘ve actually had a quality book in trial read that isn’t just a copy of others. In other words, this is good and you should read it.
i refuse to read stupid dialogs between the system and the protagonista, there is 2 things i hate the most: Plaina protagonist and system. I could no bare read more than 3 chapters because of this anoying system, It is the most unfunny thing i've seen in a novel till now.
Can't really complain it's a great novel, love the characters . It just needs a little editing but besides that it's great, I got so caught up in Bobby Wan's character I like him lol, keep it up author love your creation but please don't forget to edit ........................................
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This is legendary please continue writingIt .
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