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The story was interesting in each chapter. It had a great start, author. Congrats to that.But I'd just like to point out that you should please check for some minor grammar errors and consistency of their courtesies. And I'm sorry, but I just don't like the FL. She's too forgiving despite everything she’d went through.Then again, overall, it had engaging chapters. A lot of werewolf readers would like this.
just doing this for the free chapter honestlyStory is good. We all knw what we are relly here for.Pace is speeding up nicely, fav girl so far is the housekeeper so hopefully we get some noice scenes with her
Overall i like this book, very interesting. Im waiting for next chapter. Recommended!!
I like this kind of trope. A god or a very powerful person trying to hide it. And going into a video game with all your op characters stuff. Like Overlord or Land Of Leadale anime/MangaHope to see this grow and become something great.
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I'm looking for more chapters to read ? .
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I read a little bit, so maybe I'll update this review later, so far it's been a well written and interesting story with a protagonist who manages to be charismatic in his own way, finally, stop looking for negative reviews and start reading >:C
a very good story, I liked the proposal of the work, very good.
red flags everywhere!! can't stop reading it tho.
You really got a knack of writing. Your grammar and description is really good. I love the plot and FL sera..But it is a pity just a few chaps have been published. Keep up the good work author. Your work speaks of its efforts. Best wishes
