overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
Great cover page! Nicely written synopsis, which gives an idea of what to expect from the content. So far the story is interesting, you skillfully take the reader into an unknown, different world. Well done!
It starts off with an interesting premise and then turns into nothing but clichés.Fat best friend, top tier treasures hidden in cheap markets, cold girl who suddenly likes the protagonist after losing to him, poor parents who suddenly turn out to have hidden identities in the capitol, great treasures fighting for the chance to be picked up by him but turns out useless looking treasure was the strongest one there was, kills arrogant noble that turns out had a secret ability to tell his family about his killer, in a team tournament but doesn’t show up till team is almost defeated, plus many more.It’s as if the author has a madlibs of a generic novel and changed the names and abilities a little.Translation is also not great. Names suddenly change all the time, measurements are all over the place(100 meters becomes 100 miles and then 100 kilometers or currency is in yuan or crystals or dollars)It’s a real shame that this novel couldn’t have been better.
This novel is ' Solid ' novel that has proper background and world building.I pray the respect the author for putting the detail. It's just very easy to image every action did by MC or characters.The novel is definitely weird because the author is using ' He ' even though MC is already ' SHE ' but I will leave it author's hands. Expect that part every paragraph is excellent with the clean writing style and notable pace. I feel like reading ' Normal ' novel where most of the Cultivation novels already lost that aspects. Characters are interesting especially dialogues that are not hogwash. It is just a solid Five Stars novel from the impression of Earlier Chapters
This is a nice fix with a manipulative mc who isn't too detached and actually has friends.Decent use of the power system , however it could be described as a very loose slave systemSpoiler bellow!.......The whole fiasco with him not getting the midnight storm eyes was Pretty annoying and seemed out of place to ?
Well this is the tenth review. So I figured out to write it down myself. I started this series with a goal in mind, to have fun and enjoy writing it. But midway thought an idea popped up my mind; why don't I turn it into a comic?And so I've done that :DThe comic is now released for free at webtoon. You can check it out if you want. I apologize for my delay in updating the past period, I was kinda busy with the comic thing.However as everything is settled then I can resume writing and publishing here with the same schedule I promised; two chapters per day.Hopefully you'll like the story :)Ranmaro
definitely a pancakeswitch novel,need I say more?
The story has a common beginning but the one thing that got me out of it is the simple that the mc is inconsistent and the plot is all broken how the mc doesn't think that even with him getting beaten to death regularly and everyone he knows KNOWS of this and he doesn't care is the worst part, no empathy or connection to be created with characters like that. (his friend knows because she studies with him and there is a background that makes it obvious and his family once again knows why mc himself spoke with them.)
The MC knows how to be patient and bide his time. The story is slightly slower paced but I actually enjoy it. The pace is perfect in my opinion, and I can see this novel making it up there with the known classics. Its worth reading, give it a try!
Its fun, very entertaining and has a bit of slice of life genre. Its a good novel for passing out time relaxing and that though its kinda boring in some parts that i cant explain it lacks something that i cant express in words.
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Chinese name: 绝代名师 (Peerless master)User rating in China: 8.4Status: Ongoing (1219 chapters)Not my cup of tea, I guess it's worth reading is you like LoHP