CheekyForehead
The ending is rushed, but prior to it the novel was doing fine, cant say im an experienced enough reader to tell u wether its good or bad though, its up to u to judge it when u start reading, i wish it continued more though, just ending at 1k chapters would be fine imo
Very nice and sweet story. I want a life like this simple and satisfactory.Hope to find more such stories anyone knows then please recommend.
Thank God, I thought that I was mistaken or something. That change of Kant's, especially to his subordinates was almost heaven defying.
it's been a year this novel not updated
Thats's a good start bro, looking forward for more chaps
Just because its written No Ntr and No yuri among harem memebes/wives/lovers in synopsis, I directly give 5 stars.
Mind it, I yet to read book so better check other reviews for more info.
I love this so much. The synopsis itself is so interesting and the story? Good job author
webnovel staple. trash tier fic. don’t bother with this. dudes all over the place..>………………………….. ………………………… ………………………… ………………………… …………………………
As much as I wanted to enjoy this story, the entire thing just seamed like a slog to get through with me having to skimm 30 percent of it. The positive aspects is the anti-hero mc who will do anything to progress, decent Grammer, and an interesting power system.The negatives is a mc without any purpose or real personality, A lack of any characters with purpose, and the fact that very few important plotpoints are expanded upon or have any lasting effect.
Love it.hope author doesnt drop it
This is the best kingdom Building on this platform ever, don't look further, you can binge read this.No goodie 2 shoes stuff, characters are not no faced and have a good range of emotions.love it
This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.
