Name:A Record Of A Mortal's Journey To Immortality - Immortal World Arc 凡人修仙之仙界篇Phàm Nhân Tu Tiên chi Tiên Giới Thiên(Vietmamese)Author:Wang Yu 忘语 Vong NgữWeb:QidianStatus:CompletedChapters:1395Day Start:1-January-2017Day end:May-2018Rating(Chenggua):8.1Word:4,33 MillionNominations:28,95 Million
It's not very good. The english is broken and it's too difficult to read.The power system isn't clearly explained. I know there are numbered levels. There are knights, saints and sages. But what they can do or what's the difference between real is never explained.The world is unknown. We know some countries and cities name but we don't know where they are.The characters aren't very well constructed. What are their aspirations ? What do they like? They power up and that's it. It's just cultivating and nothing else. The MC is "smart" but he makes stupid decisions which works because the author makes him succeed. I mean, he is boastful of how quick he can make others cultivate and everything is fine because he knows others will see the benefits he brings, bla bla bla. But not everything is logical in life and you can't predict all things correctly. He shows too much while being too weak.I'm sure there are other things but I stopped after 60 chapters. I was tired to see power ups being too easy and too fast.
This is your standard Chinese novel that starts with a great concept and then slide into a pile of sewage filled hole. The author appears to hate Buddhists quite a bit and use this novel to drive his point. This is certainly in line with the CCP fear of organized religion. The rest of the reviews giving this novel 5 stars are fake reviews. You can guess who sponsored them.
THIS LOOKS PRETTY GOOD! IF IT DOESNT GET PUT UP CAN U PUT IT UP SOMEWHERE ELSE PLEASE?
Paying for a fan fic is just ridiculous.
I love your writing, especially on the prologue, it captivated the readers to visualize it like a scene in a movie. And it goes to the next chapters as well. I can see, hear, and taste each scenes as you write it. You are very good at this one. Good job author!
very unique story, lying characters are amazingly written I hope for the best for the author, good luck on the novel keep up the good work, author!
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My review is a reflection of the rest. This is the highest number of 1 star reviews I have ever seen on webnovel .
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great work, the poems are fantastic. deals with love, heartbreak, depression. topics we all face in our everyday life. so feel free to read.
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