The novel is fantastic. The system, Alice, is very unique and different from the other system novels which I have seen hundreds of. This is definitely on my favorite top 5. My favorite of all the novels he/she have written. All of the characters are fantastic. The quality of this novel is top. You should try it out and see if you like it. This is all I have to say because I'm not good with words. I also like the newly picture there.
finally a novel where the mc is not a male,i cant find any of these anywhere
I'd say it's an interesting story, I like hunter novels.
No grammatical error as far as I can read;
And this isn't bad, I'd recommend it if you're looking for a light read.
Absolutely loving the novel so far.
The beginning is a bit tense and shows just what kind of a person the MC is, and thankfully, he is a cold-blooded person that doesn't mind even killing civilians in order to get to his target.
The story starts off strong and continues with the same, with some short parts where the story slows down a bit in order to show the MC planning some things or to explain the world.
Worldbuilding is something I enjoy when done right, and so far, even though we know little about the many kingdoms and empires of the world as the story is focused on the empire where the MC resides in, we get a glimpse of the more powerful empires and characters that stand at the top of the world.
We only get a bit of them, and some explanations about who they are and how powerful they are, but it's enough as the MC is too weak to come in contact with them.
As for the MC himself, he has his goals, but there is also a bit of mystery attached to him, which I have been enjoying so far. His thoughts and plans are not simple and he knows how to plot in order to get what he needs or to eliminate those that would be an obstacle.
So far, loving the story and hoping for more of the same!
I really like the characters, they have different kind of humor. You can also easily imagine scenes and the powers they have. really excited to the twist and turns of this story.
if only the synopsis said 'become wicked and punish the good ones'...
Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potentialThere's a lot to improve authorThe grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read itStory development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novelsCharacter design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man.World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future.Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.
Hi, have the following comments and hence dropping it as it is different than what I initially thought. 1. The MC is shown has smart and cautious character, but he is anything but that. In fact many times, he just acts like a madman and then tries to justify the action through some reasoning. Maybe the author intends it to be this way, but this is not my cup of tea. For instance, he goes way back to the capital to save his friend from people with too high cultivation, when he could have intercepted and saved him whilst he was escorted to the capital. And in the end, the friend dies. .2. The MC is shown to be smart, learned and talented with amazing comprehension. But when he wants to unlock a storage ring which is usually through sense/qi/blood, he goes to a competitor and owes him a favour for telling him to use blood to open the ring. 3. The brotherhood of the MC and dog is very forced. Usually the development of such bond between the characters should be smooth and felt by the readers, but here the author just keeps on harping about friendship every other paragraph for many chapters to come.
I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. Extraordinary world building with a pretty unique magic system. Character building and progression is exceptional. World building is focused on progression of the world's concept of magic and is unique beyond words imo. Right now this is my number 1 book and it kills me when the writer's real life interferes with chapter releases, but they always keep us informed.
im rooting for bella man. she seems so much more interesting than that charlotte. well charlotte isn't bad either, but please include her some more or else i will actually move over to bellas side
This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is ,
First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page.
Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea
Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it
( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)
This book gives me a mixed feeling.when you try to be too op it removes the fun of reading.