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Because I hate Raina. End of story no more read for this. Wanna make mc coward? Ok. Wanna make mc lustful? Ok. Still can accep that. But making mc being bullied by a girl, cousin nonetheless... Meh, making me lody interest. You Author truly successful in making hateful character yet at the sametime also make me hate this story. Because of Raina.. I only give you a star. If I can, I will only give you half a star.. Zzzzzz.. Good book, acceptable mc, nice world building but ****, **** and **** girl..
Sigh, would I try to write a normal review? Eh, no. I just like it and read in a good mood, so it's an easy 5 star from me. Biased? Asf!Either way, for now it's looking like a standard reincarnated in our world to redo disappointing live, but with lewds! What life without lewds, eh?Actually not my type of stories, but that one is nice.... I mean, if you throw yourself in time and don't become famous, rich and **** some milfs - what the point of you living? ???10/10 would bang.
Well, what can I say about this. I thought (like most of us would I'm sure) that the author would butcher such a delicate genre of exp. However with each new sentence and every page turn I felt more and more immersed! The delicacy of the capitalisation on the "E" and the beautiful almost curvaceous "x" topped off with an upright unfaultable "p" really brought this particular story to a climax for me, the twist in the middle when we learn that *spoiler* "e" had actually loved "p" and not "x" all along *spoiler* made my blood boil with excitement! I couldn't wait to see what x would do... Get revenge? Or be the bigger person (or letter in this case). Please give me the last chapters I cannot bear to see such a masterpiece go to waste, I am so excited to see if x will turn to the dark side. Thank you.
dude is it me or is the author just boss buffing the opponents goalkeeper? It's not fun reading something back to back, I'm basically just skipping chapters to get to the final moments with no bs and just results. glazing is good it makes the story fun, glazing too much is just cringe. And wtf happened to the system? It's just a novel with a system for the 1st part of the story, now it's basically non existent. Good start but the author can't follow through. The system is basically a bait to pull in readers and the damn system has no consistency lol
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I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!
now let me is this story a copy from my favorite novel common you have not even changed the title. and have no one noticed it yet ? and webnovel is nothing going to do?
I like how the story starts, I can't express this enough. The intrigue built up by the interstellar-esque, rather, space adventure is really gripping, and the feeling carries through to the end of the first chapter. I do feel that disjointed feel between the first and second chapter needs some revision, but the continuing of the plot line that gripped me in the next chapter is really good.
Wooow! I love the idea of the story, especially its Sci-fi. I love the character's development, the storyline is perfect. Job well done, Author.
This is a great read! MC doesn't get sent back to the past once, but twice, which makes seeing him adapting to this situation really interesting. I like the world building. Would like to see a faster pace in these types of 'vr novels', would not like a read multiple chapters of grinding. The dialogue could be better written as well. All in all, would recommend! Happy reading!
This story requieres...patience As long as you're fine dealing with a naive and heroic Mc for 10's of chapters As well as fine with side character's acting more like the protagonist than the mc himselfIncluding a bit of gruelling frustration at the main characters action all for the sake of 'proper development 'Then go ahead. This book is defenitly for you