I love all the characters author-san! Rena is adorable and Keith is smart and doesn't do stupid things, at least not yet. The cultivation system is unique and I love Keith sucking others huehue.. especially Rena
5 star synopsis .
So It seems I am starting a new novel. Of course like any other shameless author, I have to rate my novel a 5 star. This story takes place in a world of magic and monsters called Atinen. The mc of this story is a monster, he hatched inside of a dungeon like any other monster, yet, he is different. Read to find out why.
Frequent misuse of "I meant" and other grammatical error.
Novels with strong mc in VRMMORPG =Good story❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!
Yo can you please provide the raw link please????This novel reminds me of The Greatest Showman so, I'm hooked.Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaassseeeeee.
A really good book.Mc here is clever and knows what to do. The story doesn't feel forced or anything.I would recommend this novel.
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This is beyond cringy, the grammar is fine but the writing is muh. Everybody is vomit inducing in there speech and constantly verbally sucking each other off.
Great novel for getting right to the point.If you didn't read the prologues first and skipped to the main story (like me), you get thrust into the world very early.The system is very nice, and the game is also nice. I find this story unique because the MC is very talented from the start.I personally don't prefer MCs being so absurdly talented (in the real world), but I'd recommend you to give it a try Cheers
Spoiler alert : Dont read this due to this sites money grabbing antics. You cant read this without spirit stones and chapters dont unlock without spending.