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The first chapter is a really nice pilot. The writing quality is also amazing. I think the character design is just beautiful. The updating stability should be improved, but I won't get impatient, the author would have his reasons for this. But I would recommend to upload atleast two chapters per weak if you want to become a good author. I can see the potential in your novel. And, can you please read my novel? It's titled heavens slayer. I won't force you to do a review (but I'll be glad if u did it) but I need your suggestions for the story. And as for this book, it'll really be a banger in the future. The story and world background is amazing. The start is also very well paced. Follow my advise and this book will definitely appear in others' recommendations soon!
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Cliche novel like the tunnel novels or the previous bunker apocalyptic novels with the overpowered system . Gets praised for selling water. Meets attractive women, Etc
MC ruined it for me. Don't want to spoil anything, but this novel is not worth reading even as a trial read. Already deleted previous review since some people might say I'm too serious or overreacting.
just from the synopsis alone you can already tell that it will be a skirt chasing novel, so be prepared to have a huge harem and get the story ruined
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From the little that has been published, It seems interesting and is a fun read. I hope the author continues it as it had potential. I won't give a high rating yet since there isn't enough chapters.
Not related by blood siblings.
5 of them. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
You know what this means
PLOT, PLOT, PLOT, PLOT, PLOT
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I've read the first 209 chapters and some of the comments on here seem a bit confused so here we go.
First, no harem up to 209 anyway, he's dedicated to his girlfriend.
The first section of the book is kind of a love comedy, but it still has dark points. Afterwards you find out it's set in Chinese mythology, as in Sun Wukong, the Jade Emperor and other figures exist, so it shifts to becoming a kind of political/ immortal war story.
The author laid the groundwork for the shift early on so it's not a complete surprise but some might not like the change, maybe others love it.
This is a novel about a guy who transmigrates to the body of a sect master of a destroyed sect. He is reborn with a sect building system that is based on a (mobile?) game he played in his previous life. Unfortunately the author chose to write the novel in the style of making the main character look cool is more important than the story and world building. Even just looking at the free chapters it is already clear that thr plot armor is far stronger than that of most novels in the genre. It goes so far that world building doesn't always make sense with what the mc does and very often motivations for actions taken by characters is questionable. And even though the author tries to make it look like the mc can be in danger but bc the plot armor is so obvious there is never any suspense about the mc winning or losing a fight. In some fights the author even just straight up says the opponent, who is a major realm stronger than the mc, cannot win before the fight even starts. This novel can also be explained as a not so original idea delivered with mediocre writing quality and storytelling. Having said that I have also seen many novels who done far worse but don't have expectations when reading this, it is a time filler at best.