Nice start, gonna love it. Go a head sist, wish you have a good luck then. Thanks for always create the nice story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good story. was really looking forward to it.
Then CHINA happened. Only in China does spiritual power increase more than normal.
MC has no qualms about killing Russians because they are 'whites' but for Chinese people, they are friends.
Higher realms all Chinese.
China not a simple country, but it's fine to pick fights with the other ones.
In any case..... I am sure this won't be picked. However good the story is as a non-china person, this novel is just too bad to even try :V
Teacher : How old is your father ?
Kid : He is 6 years old
Teacher : What? How is that possible?
Kid : He became my father only when I was born..
Logic!!
overall its good but there is a problem the numbers!! its so annoying what are you making is a novel not a bibble with chapters! sad but will drop.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it and I want to know if you’re sop writing this book if so please don’t because this book is to good to be not
Based on the story tittle and story line the story is very OK, easy to read and understand, so it is recommended for everyone to dive into it and start reading...
Translation quality honestly just kills this story for me, it keeps changing terms like the realm of mages int the story from chapter to chapter and is not consitent at all. The story is nothing special, op mc who hides his strength, because he is not strong enough yet to show it and needs to reach the peak first.
I loved this story really the only complaint I could possibly have is I feel like it needs to be proof read one more time for small typos other than that I hope there is a sequel
still here sis and lil bro. will there be updates soon? what happening with the other story you was talking about?
Pretty big copy pasta that turned stale real quick. Nothing special here. Might be enjoyable for someone who is completely new to the genre or has not even read the original novel this one is copying. Although I would the original isnt that good either...
Not worth wasting coins on
The story seems to be some type of darker imitation of second coming of gluttony and some other novels. The plot and the personality of the main character are always being forced. World building is decent though. Grammar is also ok but there are quite a few typos here and there and needs some editing. Well tldr: give it a try but it mostly caters to a niche group of people.
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