review as of chapter 400, it's actually very nice. if you like cultivating for 1thousand yrs, then you'll probably like this. they're a little similar but the mc here is not as cautious compared to 1thousand yrs.
what i really like here is that there's literally no woman here
spoiler he can cultivate avatars, and his avatars also has eternal life
Does anyone know hot to get a free pass to read this
Damn, I vote hard for this. There novels about western-fashioned magic systems are so few... And I like them most)
Also would be great if MC was similar to Leylin in logic(not some philanthropic hypocrite) and his search for the truth of the world)))
when I read first chapter, it felt like my childhood days
Seu Brasileiro, pervertido, fã de RPG safadinho, boa novel, [img=recommend]
The story is a bit slow paced ,but I like the relation of the Mc and his brother , yeah you gotta like it too, it's like AOT a bit in the first.
This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me!Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!
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this sound pretty interesting. I hope this is like your another system novel
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Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures .
As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.