Good novel i liked it, no special reason just did
progressing quite good, hope their will be more fights in the future,till now only cultivating, nothing else.but its better to get strong to go provoke someone, !!OP MC
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The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!
Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up
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Why is it that webnovel still gives us these random crap books that are just copy-pasted of a different book but done worse. Please webnovel stop only putting random trash into the site, the good boy social credit points must be worth it.
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First off, thanks for the content purple_mage. I've enjoyed reading so far. A few things I'd like to say. Please work on your grammar and spelling. I think you just need to proofread a bit more and it will fix most of the mistakes. In terms of the story itself and moving forward, I think you should really keep in mind: A. pacing B. conflict . Right now the pacing is moving very fast, which is fine, but just be careful because if you do slow it down, it can be jarring for the reader. The only real downside to fast pacing is character development can be kind of neglected in favor of fast plot. In terms of conflict.. I think it's no secret that our MC is OP, and that is intended. Which is just fine. You just have to get creative to write a real conflict for him to face. Remember, not all conflicts have to involve swords and bloodshed and who has the higher cultivation realm. Finally, I REALLY hope you, in future, put some love into character development, especially for the female characters (the harem). Interactions, dialogue, maybe even dedicated chapters from the woman's perspective? A little bit of love can go a long way. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take things!
I started to read because of the sinopse... But in less that 30 chapters what got my interest was finished and turned in a simple power novel. Is not bad, but I didn't like.
The MC is a 20 year old transmigrator but acts like an old guy that has lived for a million years. The novel started off good when the MC slowly gets stronger, but the translation quality threw me off when she becomes he vice versa. And there were plenty of times where a sentence doesn't make sense so I had to guess what the real translation was. Basically, it throws off my immersion into the story and jolts me awake. The worst thing about this novel that made me stop at ch390 or so is the constant nagging or teaching of how to be a true swordsman. It felt like the author was trying to brainwash the reader and teach the reader how to be a good person. Or in this case, a good sword dao user. It got so annoying with the history of little bits and pieces of every location and the MC teaching everyone how the correct way to act that I had to drop this novel from annoyance. I recommend people give this novel a try but know what's ahead of you in the later chapters.