HaoridKen
This novel reads as if it were written by a teenager, and by chapter 13, the inconsistencies are glaring (does the author have such a poor memory that they can't keep track of 13 chapters?).
Moreover, the plot is a standard trope, poorly executed—a grand conspiracy by a demon race to lower human defenses.
The characters are superficial and adhere rigidly to clichéd stereotypes.
(Spoiler: The main character has encountered and fought alongside archmages and heroes in the past, played a role in subduing dragons and demon lords, yet is astonished by how powerful an aura is, describing it as inhuman and beyond anything he’s ever known—simply because it has enough power to destroy a single tree. WT...)
So he is one of those harem seeking protagonists?
Sigh, this novel is basically abandoned here. It's just me reading and commenting to myself, like a patient with schizophrenia.
Short story but very heart-warming. No unnecessary drama between the female and male leads. Great if you don't know what to read or you need to recover after reading something very tragic.
I like harem hehe
Oh thanks I loved the accents in the game whole reason I played it though I play a lot of games I'm trying afk journey cause all the adds keeping pooing up I've been harassed to play a game by you tube algorithm please help me
Been a while, though I thought There was a Chapter they where going to heal his are and hair. One day I will search for it and finish.
Yo...you are everywhere ??
the female lead is typical mary sue and the male lead is kinda pedophile, i mean the ml is 19 and the fl is 13. if they are adults with 6 year age gap then i guess that's ok but the fl is 13 so i think it's bad. Also the female lead does nothing i mean the male lead does everything and the male lead hurts people for not answering him. i guess it's natural because he is "cold-blooded" but i think he is just muscles without brains. the novel is draggy because the fl keep pretending to be good to the step mother and it keeps dragging the story which is unnecesary. the fl is also VERY OP she can sing dance and she is also beautiful as f*ck. the fl saves the ml and male lead fall in love , stalks her, follows her and pampers her and the female lead deos nothing at the story sooooo the summary is THE FL DOES NOTHING AND IS A MARY SUE AND THE ML DOES EVERYTHING. that's it
4000$ is nothing depending on features the phone offers.
I have nothing against this novel, I just couldn't move past ch 30 and this is my second try...
It's a good story though
Ch 428 is hilarious
