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The story is so well written, I really wonder if With the way things are going now if Tess is gonna muTte in front of everyone, that’s gonna be amazing.
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The beginning was great, it was exciting, never knew what is gonna happen next, but after he met the childrean everything kinda went downhill. While at the beginning it actually felt like we are having a mc who is a monster later it felt more like a family friendly disney show, not sure while the author deceided to switch genre to wholesome from one chapter to the next. Overall great beginning but starting at 35+ transformed into a boring disney movie.
why do I feel like he going to have idiot thoughts about his sisters , that is kind of disrespectful to thing that about your sisters.??????????Besides this novel focuses about the MC system & sisters rather than the plot of the story and the descriptions of the another characters ??????
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The story has great potential. Do continue plots without jumping. My request to the author is to make a balanced plot transition when getting world core.
find a good diamond here. this one have a good potential
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch.But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
Ok I’m only on chapter 12, but this is absolutely beautifully written, im actually have trouble believing this is an original on webnovel as this could genuinely be a full fledged book
This is incredible, the characters and how they interact feel real,the banter is on point and the overall quality of the story is top notch,atleast in my opinion this is one of the best stories on this website. The MC doesn't take shit from anybody and his personality matches his background , all the characters up to this point that have been introduced matter to the story atleast to some degree and have their own way of doing things. Really, really recommend.