Luc4r1o
honestly I'm just reviewing for the free fast pass so do ignore my opinion
Great world building although I just started I can feel that this novel is one of a kind. Keep it up author this novel is great . And to all readers out there this novel will not waste your time.
The way you described Ibrahim...he sounds just like what I wanted to be...I don't mean being a mafia but having a strong aura just like him. I really liked the character's description. Best of luck in finishing it. I am hoping for a lovely ending with our fmc.
Its ok not bad but not great and he still cares about his childhood friend which is annoying.
This is a great story with good worldbuilding and character design.
six chapters in and already found one of the worst novel i have ever read
Boo. Nothing I haven't see before. person from earth ends up in cultivation world with cheat likes to throw the 'we are brothers ' cliche around disgusting me to no end. He's not particularly smart not is he particularly stupid. But this is so cliche and a textbook that I really don't see the point in bothering to read it after ch.19. His use of the cheat isn't excellent, adequate at best. This novel doesn't have a charm to make me want to read more on the other hand it overuses the brother hood disgusting trope that makes me want to drop so. DRopm . If you don't mind bland cliches with overused brotherhood drama then be my guest.
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The plot and writing style is fun and light with a moderate pace. The story flow is also relatable and the character description is good! I think it will be better if you add more description about the places but overall it is an interesting one! Keep up the good work author!!
That Pea soup fog got me good! The story is very fascinating, and I really love how detailed the announcements are in the chapters! Although I am still at the first few parts of the story, I can tell that this is going to progress as awesome as the book cover of your novel! I cannot wait to read more about this~
I am innocent pepe.I have done millions useless reviews which no one listens to, and that makes me sad.Why am I still writing reviews?I don't know.
