I really am really enjoying the story so far. I was wondering how often you update is it weeekly or just whenever you have time. I enjoy both systems and tamer stories you don’t get a lot of just tamer stories
Its a meh fanfic. Nothing really different from other MMO fics out there. Only thing I find disappointing is the MC suddenly trusts Silent Night right after he was betrayed. Then she takes up as much screen time as our MC where I gave up continuing the fic. Freaking romantic interests killed the story for me.
Lets see. How to write a review...Ah Translator-san and Editor-san, you guys are amazing! The translation is great, the story is moving along nicely! However, I have some things I want to point out:You guys are extremely slow! If not for the awesomeness of your editor, I would rate you guys 2 out of 5 stars! Every other novels on webnovel has like, 200 chapters a day, but you guys? It takes years to get anything out! And then how dare you decrease your translation amount due to real life issues? Come on, keep up with the times! Then, the character design: how does a 10-year-old boy out drink a plump Taoist who constantly indulges in worldly pleasures? Most, if not all, of the characters are flat. You have the mischievous boy who plays by no one's rules but his own. There's the cold but aloof beauty. There's the beauty that's out to kill him. There's the handsome--but single-minded--guy who's against our MC. MC has a loyal dog---ahem--sidekick, who is there for comedic relief. When will they grow (personality wise)? I guess I should be thanking that our MC isn't a cultivation freak who sits in one place for 15 years to cultivate *cough*Wang Lin*cough*. Then, everyone's constantly howling. They're secretly werewolves in human skin, I tell you. Even that deadly Python Toad is no exception. The world is like any other "cultivating" worlds out there. There's a level structure that these worlds can't seem to escape. There's also a sect, and the sect hands out missions. People fly on swords and tries to earn cultivation resources. I guess it can't be help though, since you'll want to sell what works. I'll even bet $10 bucks that there will be a tournament arc. And then there will be "world-shaking" beauties with skins "as smooth as jade" and as "soft as silk". It's too bad you won't be able to bet with me. :P The story is great though! Our MC takes us off the conventional path. He doesn't behead everyone in sight, and he doesn't become the white knight either. Instead, he treads more by the twilight, pushing and pulling when needed to accomplish what he wants (doesn't care too much for the thoughts and opinions of others). My favorite part was when he decides to run with his fat friend, for no reason other than "you're suppose to run after you do something bad." I actually LMAO'd that time! So far, I hope the story keeps developing as to how it currently is. I don't want him to get any quick power ups, as it'll detract from the one thing that distinguishes this story apart from other cultivating novels. But, thank you very much, sir editor for taking your time to review this novel! :PHi Myriea. I love your kid's picture. Makes me smile when I see him.
One of the few 5* you'll see me give. Back when I first saw King's Avatar anime, I was instantly hooked to the story so much that I wanted to actually read it. I've never read light novels back then, only watched anime, and Kings Avatar was my bridge towards it. That's when I found Gravity Tales. And in Gravity Tales, I fell in love with 2 novels other than TKA, one was Zhan Long, and the other was this one, but it was called Shin Wan Zuoh I believe. And let me tell you, this is still the standard I compare other similar works to. In my opinion obviously, this set the bar high because it was well written, has a smooth pace and it was a page turner. All the characters where given life and their legendary adventures where worth waiting 24 hours for, when the next chapter would be uploaded. Verdict: MUST READ...IMMEDIATELY! Lol.
the story is quite good actually, just that it weirds me out how it has been set similar to a game or the fact that the sect elders can't verbally pass any Techniques and are looking forward to *unlocking* new maps ?
5 stars just cause I can....................................................................................................................................
Another trash novel.Mc only complains and call others hackers. The system also sucks. The story is nothing new and plot is also copy and paste. Don't recommend reading.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Ridiculously greedy translator and can't even admit it. Leaves ww to come here for more money then switches over to premium for more money with the excuse of giving more back to the author. Like anyone believes that mess. If that was the case why not set up something to directly donate towards the author but no you just want a bigger piece of pie. Not to mention how many ranks this novel jumped after going premium.
This novel is extremely written! Minimal grammar and spelling mistakes, and apparently the author has already planned all of it!? I don't see why no one would not want to read this!
Holy crap I never expected to see this picked up again, This was one of my favorite novels I was pretty damn sad to see this dropped! So basically this is about a person who transmigrated into this universe and picks up disciples who has a trope such as (had their destiny stolen and is now bullied) or (a trash who couldn't cultivate) and unleashes their plot armor!
Unless he writes a normal novel without any magic or cultivation or high tech or evolution, he is going to blow himself up due to the pure amount of energy in his body