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Pretty good if you want to read a story with a headstrong mc.
I love this bookI love the cover I love the writing style I love the mystery and how the author pulls me in the story following Ryan and Thorne in their investigation I love Ryan and Suzy ( their love and bickering)I love Byron. He’s the best younger brother. Overall, I give this book a ?I just have one request, can you please post like 2 chapters daily Pretty please ?
I like this story it' s like a fairytale!!! i want to read it at once!
I feel like this could be a good story but once again Chatgpt or another AI took a large part in writing this. The vocabulary and the way the scenes are described just feels unnatural and too deep for a fantasy novel. Maybe if you used a bit less AI and more of your own writing skills this could be better
Great work! the world ? the first uwowy to the teacher in the first super bowl in the test for a second time at the end of the season with princess
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Karna is my idol! fellow brother! good luck with the novel , actually hindu mythology is rarely picked for a fantasy novel (I know some popular series and anime like Fate but they only use some characters) this is an uncharted path with lots of potential keep it up??I'm a fan of your other novels too so I expect a good novel?
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A novel with more than 200 chaps for free is being sold for money? ebfinpiwefpewifweihowiehfowiehfowhifowfhowehfoihfoiwhfoihwoifhoihoiefefnkefn
I don't read this genre but still I recommend it to someone who enjoy reading action, exploration, and tunnels. Skye is a remarkable person n your novel. The idea is fresh and interesting. I enjoyed how you depicted events from the viewpoint of the main character while keeping the side characters alive.
When I read in the synopsis "If you can't handle gay..." I took that as a challenge, Aside from being provoked to reading the story was actually pretty good. Keep up the good work
The MC is so stupid it makes me seem like a genius. He doesn't eve acknowledge the fact that he is in another world, he is very slow and keeps apologising to pre-recorded messages and to things that are just exp bags.
