I was told by this young lady that her boss want to invest a huge project in her, weird hen? So, I came to see maybe i can do something big, bigger then where I am!
The faint illumination from the Mage Lights hanging from his assigned rooms cast strange shadows against the walls. The devices were long due for some maintenance, the spell structures coming apart with age. One particular Light flickered incessantly, and he was tempted to tear it apart and put it back together correctly, but if he did, some poor Mage Apprentice would lose a chance to make a few coins. Recalling his own Apprenticeship, he controlled himself and just turned the offending device off before returning to the table and searching through the stack of worn paper lying haphazardly on the table to continue his reading.
Why it stop updating the novel? Pls can you update the novel again, i miss all the character and the story.It makes me curious about the next line
"I don't know, he didn't say anything to me before leaving. But he already made it clear he wouldn't come to our aid during our time on the island so we're on our own from here on out.
"My sweetheart, how could I ever hate you? You're the one I love the most."
The hall was equipped for a business-type conferencing meetings.
I love it! It's very different compared to the other rebirth/reincarnation stories. It's much more subtle and a bit of a slow burn. You'll have to rely on the clues given throughout the chapters to know who the MC might be. The MC is not that overbearing or arrogant (unlike the ones who has their egos scattered everywhere, jesus christ), and she's very diligent about the decisions she make.I really liked it. My only problem is that it doesn't have that much chapters yet. I looked it up and it has 500+ chapters, I think? But then again, the translated works have only come out fairly recently so I can forgive that.I recommend reading this novel and good luck to the translators!
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I really like your content so far. You attention to detail is what i find most intriguing. I liked the character arc of the protagonist and the direction his story is heading. Its looking good overall and i am eagerly waiting for the next one
i know i shouldn’t be reviewing my own book, but i think this would be a nice read for people who like sci fi and fantasy! i hope this gets around to people too!
I kind of like it...The story, detail, powers, world building and immersion are all great. The only and main problem is the mc. He seems to have a hero complex which greatly takes away from the immersion of the story. It's also strange how he questioned himself for having feelings for his father who he called a stranger because he was from a different world and didn't know that person but not for strangers from a village full of people he definitely didn't know but still risked his life for. I can't help but fear that his need to help and save people will slow him down, bring about extra baggage, danger and unnecessary forced plots.
so far it's ok I have read other novel author always has intresting concepts and story but sucker at writing now author has improved