Love it, can’t wait for the next issue. Love the way you’ve introduced the characters so far.
First of all, I must say this is a very well-written novel. The author clearly has a lot of talent when it comes to storytelling. The characters are well-designed, and the story is easy to follow. So far, there are only two chapters, but I am confident the upcoming ones will keep me entertained from beginning to end.The only issue I have is with the spacing between paragraphs, and the second chapter feels way too long. Despite this, I still give this work a solid 9/10.
It looks like a good book. I haven’t read it yet. Tho Have you considered adding R-18? or just some mature scenes in general.
"Assistant!" the doctor shouted again.
"We didn't see anything at the site of the crash."
And all that glitters is gold
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
And It looks like these monster are hardly affected by any chemicals and physically killing them is lost easier. So the scientists are also worried sick and are put a lot more work by the government for results.
My world's on fire, how about yours?
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?