I dropped this after 320 chapters. The story is interesting, the lore is attractive and with a slow space and a part of the time you don't have enough information and the MC. My biggest problem is that this story has disorganized chapters out of place. These are the memoirs of the MC or something similar to it, each volumen represents some part of the story of the MC. But they are not necessarily in chronological order. That's all nice and all, but when you get to a pick in the story and suddenly start a new volumen and is of another point of the life the MC is sharing,the worst part is that there is not even a little bit of preambule to this change, the new volume starts with a character you don't know or care taking half a chapter. There are chapters of other volumes in between. You end up unblocking a chapter to find it was from the previous volume. And this last thing is really problematic, as the authordoesn't seem to care or try to correct this mistake.
its good plis continue
I absolutely love this book, it's one of my favorites. I understand it can be really difficult to write books, but I really hope the author will make a wonderous return!
Great story and writing. The basic idea somewhat reminds me of Bleach, but the writing is fantastic and interesting. Funny commentary always gets a chuckle. A better read than most of the popular books.
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I've been looking for it, you should put a link or something if u want to move it. Hope everything ok and pls update faster lol. I'll always support u my friend..
JustReally cringyMC is a card boardEvery one is a card board.................................................. ...........................
Very good quality of every aspect and very enjoyable with a good development and belivable but funny characters.If i were to add anything it would more grinding for levels
Reading status:- 19 chapStory is average, translation is alright but story feels monotonous, you can read it to pass time.Um also there are some plot holes.
Real trash the main character acts like a badass in real life but is the definition of beta male in game. I don’t know about anyone else but that sounds retarded and backwards but for some reason the author wrote it this way. If you dislike novels where the mc is thrown around by women and acts like nothing bad is happening then this novel is for you if not don’t bother. The worst part about it though is that in the beginning the mc seemed like a badass but 15 chapters in he becomes more of a pussy who does what every a women tells him like the mc from super gene.
The writing style is tell don't show, plot armor is thicker than a bunker buried a mile deep, and the author doesn't care to ask themselves what we the readers might like to know or even need to know...If you want a brainless read this is alright but make sure you actually turn off your brain cause otherwise you'll be frustrated.If the author ever reads this my advice is to do a major rewrite of the whole story. Get a friend who reads a lot to read though the work and point out what you can do better and work on your craft. This could, and I'll repeat COULD, be good if more effort was put into it. Most stories become good in the rewrite.The first time you write it it's a rough draft. The second time it's okay...About the third time it's good and worth people's attention.
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