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The story line resemble the movies jumanji 2, but it automatically challenges the author to write something familiar yet very different. I can say only after reading the first 4 chapter that author have done a great job.
translation is bad. I'ts possible to understand it, but its clear its machine translated and edited. I'ts one of the better machine edits though, ill give it that. The plot and story isent too bad but nothing special. Not special enough to bother reading this edited machine translation.
It starts slow, but that's fine because it's hilarious and the author is grilling cliches like an op cultivator wipes out offencers. After reading 21 chapters, I'm hooked and checking WN to see if a new chapter is posted. ? Cultivator and level up cliches... I have high expectations. Don't let me down...
Compared to other novel the update is too slow they should have at least stock some chapters after all they were in the voting phase for more than 1 month
First of all, this is stupid. Immortal cultivation run on some sort of energy from world. So, you are dead if you are in a void where there is no energy for you to stop. In that regard, martial arts are more reliable that they are breaking your limits not borrowing strength from the world to work around limits. Second, by cultivating, you are absorbing energy of the world, meaning, you are giving yourself to the world for longevity. So, you are just a glorified slave of the world. Sure, in your world, you will be pretty strong but what if you are in another world? You would just be some ordinary guy. Third, you are limiting yourself. You can only advance when heaven allow you to whereas martial artists can break through with enough hard work.
Great novel but update schedule horrible
I don't know what to write but since the author is asking for a review so here. Your book is good. Really good, yea well for me. However, I just don't like harem, hope it's not a harem. Anyways, this 5 start to motivate you more to release more chapters.
I really don't have a thing about perfection, but hey it suits the story very well and you really did it. Not like it's totally flawless but I just can't give you less.. I.. I just can't. It's really great, excluding the update stability which the world of readers really wants. Nice work anyways hahaha Hope you continue giving us great story development. See ya in your next updates ^^
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Though it sounds like it would be a good story I was confused once I saw that before he had transmigrated, he had been betrayed. Then in the synopsis tags and says " -lifetime companions" and "-no loner mc". This actually threw me off from wanting to read, how would you have an mc who's been betrayed by his closest friends and killed by them, reincarnate as a spoiled young master and have him go and still look for lifetime friends and not be a loner mc ? ironic.