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The story concept is interesting, but so many other factors ruin it for me. The MC says many things that just seem sexist. There are tons of run on sentences and grammar issues as well. Plus, there are some scenes that are so awkwardly written. Like discussing the skills of the group only to go on a tangent about how no one has enough mana to use skills and they will just have to attack any monsters until they die. If that's how it is, just skip the introduction and move onto the fighting.
Hahaha man, its fresh for me with that old man bast*rd. But every chapter its to short. How much word it takes ? less than 1000 ? i think its better you make for more than 1000 word per chapter
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I just like it, good, okay, yes, right, yeah..interesting..❁
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
it's good but it still needs a lot of work. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space.
A great novel, sometimes it feels like a lord of mysteries and sometimes it has a lighter footprint. I see potentialI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT ITI WANT IT
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