The school nurse glance at Arthur...seeing him covered in blood will affect the other students.
I kept cursing in my mind, it was hard to shovel with my hands. And now I think about it, we wanted to use a metal spell to get above it.
"R-Really!?" (Fran)
Chu Fan put his finger up.
"Simplicity isn't always a bad thing. Especially when it comes to tactics. That's what my grandfather said."
"Dad," Ezra mouthed.
"Guess you will have to wait a little". He put his hands in his pocket and walked away smiling at the crowd.
The sound of an explosion behind him told him that the shells had started falling again. He was gritting his teeth in anger at the unfairness of it all. He was a Ninja! Ninja fought!
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Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
A very good story i most say, it start fresh with description of event very easy to understand. The battle scene left more to be desired but Julius truly had a good head over his shoulder due to his strategic mind.I haven't read that far but if what was started with was continued we will have one of the best Kingdom building novels.Give it a try, you won't regret it.
The authors premise is solid enough. Character and plot development need work. The writing as a whole is stilted and needs polishing. The writing style seems to point to the authors lack of maturity. I'm sure he or she will be able to weave more coherent tales as they grow as an author. This is not a bad effort though and the novel as a whole is readable unlike others I have read. This author is right on the precipice of being a good writer. It won't hurt to give this story a read. Just know that it is lacking. Especially in character interactions with other characters and the way situations are fleshed out. An example is how the world reacts to the characters return from the seven year dungeon. Another is the interaction between the character and the guild his father helped found.